Thanks very much Philippe, Donna, and Rafik for drafting this. In the penultimate paragraph, I suggest appending the following sentence in red:

We would recommend for language to be amended for clarity from “they will take into account the overall composition of the proposed CSC in terms of geographic diversity and skill set” to “The ccNSO and GNSO Council will consider the overall composition of the proposed CSC in terms of geographic diversity and skill sets” to indicates explicitly the role of the GNSO and ccNSO councils. We furthermore encourage the respective councils to appoint members in line with the principles and elements of diversity that were identified by the Cross-Community Working Group on Accountability Work Stream 2 Diversity Sub-Group.

Best wishes,

Ayden Férdeline

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On 24 May 2018 8:22 AM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak@gmail.com> wrote:

Hi all,

as a follow-up of the council call, I am sending the draft comment for CSC charter review made by the small drafting team for council consideration.
The deadline for submission is the 1st June.
I would like to thank again Philippe and Donna for volunteering.

Best,

Rafik