Thanks Marika.

Thank you to the drafting team.  Overall, this looks good.  I propose I tweak:

Replace:

Yes, the EPDP is currently active working on reviewing the Temporary Specification to produce GDPR compliance policy with the WHOIS.

With

Yes, the EPDP is currently active working on reviewing the Temporary Specification to produce a WHOIS policy that is compliant with the GDPR.

I think it makes it more clear that ePDP work is not to develop a GDPR compliance policy, but rather to develop WHOIS policy that is compliant with GDPR. 

Best,

Paul

From: Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org>
Sent: Wednesday, July 18, 2018 5:28 AM
To: McGrady, Paul D. <PMcGrady@winston.com>; Martin Pablo Silva Valent <mpsilvavalent@gmail.com>; council@gnso.icann.org
Subject: Re: [council] GNSO Review of the Panama GAC Communique

Thanks, Paul, not sure what happened there but hopefully the attached version will be easier to read. I am still having issues in getting the footnotes to outline properly, but at least this should be readable. I did go ahead and updated the heading so it reads GNSO Council review. Other edits / comments will be addressed by the drafting team.

Best regards,

Marika

From: council <council-bounces@gnso.icann.org> on behalf of "McGrady, Paul D." <PMcGrady@winston.com>
Date: Tuesday, July 17, 2018 at 23:46
To: Martin Pablo Silva Valent <mpsilvavalent@gmail.com>, "council@gnso.icann.org" <council@gnso.icann.org>
Subject: Re: [council] GNSO Review of the Panama GAC Communique

Thanks Martin.

Staff, the formatting is off.  Can you please send around a cleaned up version for review?  Secondly, it is mislabeled as “GNSO Review of …”.  It should be “GNSO Council Review of…” because the Council is not, of course, the GNSO itself.

Thanks much!

Best,

Paul

From: council <council-bounces@gnso.icann.org> On Behalf Of Martin Pablo Silva Valent
Sent: Tuesday, July 17, 2018 12:16 PM
To: council@gnso.icann.org
Subject: [council] GNSO Review of the Panama GAC Communique

Hello all,

Hereby I send the draft version of the GNSO Review of the Panama GAC Communique for your consideration. Thanks to Staff, Johan and Michele for working on it.

Best,

Martín

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