Wolf and Maria, Thank-you to Wolf for preparing and Maria for developing. I have attempted to further refine the letter and trust that I have not misunderstood anything. Please could you and fellow councillors check and contribute if you feel inclined to do so that we can move on to finalise this letter. Jonathan From: owner-council@gnso.icann.org [mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org] On Behalf Of Maria Farrell Sent: 16 November 2012 16:02 To: KnobenW@telekom.de Cc: council@gnso.icann.org Subject: Re: [council] Draft ATRT2 letter Dear Wolf, I don't have anything substantive to add, but in the spirit of helpfulness have had a crack at polishing the English phrasing. All the best, Maria On 16 November 2012 10:39, <KnobenW@telekom.de> wrote: All, following the discussion at the council meeting I've drafted the letter to ICANN board and GAC chair (see attached). Please comment as well as help to polish the English phrasing. Best regards Wolf-Ulrich