Just a nit:

The GNSO Council and the GAC was asked....should be WERE asked

Other than that it looks good to me.

-----Original Message-----
From: owner-council@gnso.icann.org on behalf of Stéphane Van Gelder
Sent: Thu 3/15/2012 1:24 PM
To: <Mary.Wong@law.unh.edu>
Cc: council@gnso.icann.org
Subject: Re: [council] DRAFT text for Board Comment

Thanks Mary. Here is the revised version.