Stephanie,

One possibility would be to reference Specification 1, 1.2, 1.3 and 1.4 paragraphs of the 2012+ gTLD registry agreements:
https://newgtlds.icann.org/sites/default/files/agreements/agreement-approved-31jul17-en.html

But different agreements would have the same text in different parts. 


Rubens


On 28 Jun 2018, at 12:41, Stephanie Perrin <stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca> wrote:

Thanks Rubens, I did note the explanation of picket fence above, but it is insufficient.  Would suggest perhaps a footnote that goes into detail with e.g. reference to sample clauses, positioning in the text perhaps better at first introduction.

SP

On 2018-06-28 12:35, Rubens Kuhl wrote:

Stephanie,

I added some replies to your text. 


Rubens



On 28 Jun 2018, at 12:11, Stephanie Perrin <stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca> wrote:

I have made extensive comments to the document. 

Stephanie Perrin

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