Hi Ayden, Thanks for your work on this. I have asked Steve to incorporate some of your stylistic edits and some additional language, but I don’t think we can include the commentary on the participation of other SO/AC members in the EPDP and suggestions that other groups are sending discredited and disruptive members to engage with the GNSO. That’s not something we should include in our formal report on the SPS. Thanks, Keith From: council <council-bounces@gnso.icann.org> On Behalf Of Ayden Férdeline Sent: Thursday, February 28, 2019 3:14 AM To: Darcy Southwell <darcy.southwell@endurance.com> Cc: gnso-secs@icann.org; council@gnso.icann.org Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [council] FW: DRAFT - 2019 GNSO Council Strategic Planning Session Report Please find attached suggested edits. Thank you. Ayden Férdeline ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ On Wednesday, February 27, 2019 10:29 PM, Darcy Southwell <darcy.southwell@endurance.com<mailto:darcy.southwell@endurance.com>> wrote: Thanks, Steve. My comments were addressed adequately. Appreciate your work here. Darcy On Wed, Feb 27, 2019 at 2:30 PM Steve Chan <steve.chan@icann.org<mailto:steve.chan@icann.org>> wrote: Dear Councilors, Attached, please find the proposed final 2019 Strategic Planning Session report, with red-lined edits. Thank you all for your review. Darcy, please take a look at the suggested edits and let me know if you find them acceptable. There was one comment on Day 2, section B where I ended up not making a change, so please let me know if you have any issues with that approach. Best, Steve From: council <council-bounces@gnso.icann.org<mailto:council-bounces@gnso.icann.org>> on behalf of Steve Chan <steve.chan@icann.org<mailto:steve.chan@icann.org>> Date: Tuesday, February 26, 2019 at 1:43 PM To: Darcy Southwell <darcy.southwell@endurance.com<mailto:darcy.southwell@endurance.com>>, "Drazek, Keith" <kdrazek@verisign.com<mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com>> Cc: "gnso-secs@icann.org<mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org>" <gnso-secs@icann.org<mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org>>, "council@gnso.icann.org<mailto:council@gnso.icann.org>" <council@gnso.icann.org<mailto:council@gnso.icann.org>> Subject: Re: [council] FW: DRAFT - 2019 GNSO Council Strategic Planning Session Report Thanks very much for the suggested changes and input Darcy. I will revert a red-lined document tomorrow, to allow for any additional input from other Councilors. Best, Steve From: council <council-bounces@gnso.icann.org<mailto:council-bounces@gnso.icann.org>> on behalf of Darcy Southwell <darcy.southwell@endurance.com<mailto:darcy.southwell@endurance.com>> Date: Tuesday, February 26, 2019 at 7:45 AM To: "Drazek, Keith" <kdrazek@verisign.com<mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com>> Cc: "gnso-secs@icann.org<mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org>" <gnso-secs@icann.org<mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org>>, "council@gnso.icann.org<mailto:council@gnso.icann.org>" <council@gnso.icann.org<mailto:council@gnso.icann.org>> Subject: Re: [council] FW: DRAFT - 2019 GNSO Council Strategic Planning Session Report Thanks for the reminder, Keither. And thanks to staff for putting this report together. We discussed so many issues and concepts in detail during that three days ... the level of detail caputured in tihs report is impressive. I've added some comments to the attached to highlight points of clarification or expanded detail from my perspective. Thanks, Darcy On Mon, Feb 25, 2019 at 5:39 PM Drazek, Keith via council <council@gnso.icann.org<mailto:council@gnso.icann.org>> wrote: Hi all, A reminder to please review the 2019 SPS Report and provide any suggested edits or comments to Steve by tomorrow. Thanks, Keith From: council <council-bounces@gnso.icann.org<mailto:council-bounces@gnso.icann.org>> On Behalf Of Steve Chan Sent: Tuesday, February 19, 2019 9:13 PM To: Drazek, Keith via council <council@gnso.icann.org<mailto:council@gnso.icann.org>> Subject: [EXTERNAL] [council] DRAFT - 2019 GNSO Council Strategic Planning Session Report Dear Councilors, Attached, please find the draft report from the 2019 GNSO Council Strategic Planning Session, which seeks to capture objectives, discussions, agreements, and action items for each of the three days. The report has been added as a brief AOB item for the upcoming Council meeting, not necessarily to discuss in detail, but to provide a high-level overview and to communicate a deadline for your review and suggested edits. Please let me know if you have any questions. 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