Thanks Rubens, I did note the explanation of picket fence above, but it is insufficient. Would suggest perhaps a footnote that goes into detail with e.g. reference to sample clauses, positioning in the text perhaps better at first introduction.
SP
Stephanie,
I added some replies to your text.
Rubens
On 28 Jun 2018, at 12:11, Stephanie Perrin <stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca> wrote:
<edits SP draft Charter.docx>_______________________________________________I have made extensive comments to the document.
Stephanie Perrin
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