I posted earlier to the Council several suggestions, and included a new draft of the resolution. It is pasted below, for simple clarity.... this is what my substitute text looks like, without mark up. I did post a marked up version, but I understand that is confusing in plain text. So, consider this a substitute text to the chairman's draft/redraft: ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- (3) The Council will undertake a dialogue with governments, via the GAC, and to include the SSAC, to work towards developing a broadly understandable definition of the purposes for which the current data required in the Registrar Accreditation Agreement (see clause 3.4 of http://www.icann.org/registrars/ra-agreement-17may01.htm ), as listed below, is collected, retained and used. The dialogue should seek to examine and understand consumer protection, privacy/data protection and law enforcement views and perspectives and concerns, taking into account ICANN's mission and core values. In addition, to inform the Council's deliberations, this dialogue and examination should include gathering information and discourse with a representative group of ccTLD managers regarding their policies and rules of access to ccTLD data, and relevant national laws.