Dear all, Please find attached suggested edits. Thank you very much to Heather, Marika, and Rafik for preparing it. I would also like to endorse the suggestion by Philippe that URLs be added. Thank you, Ayden Férdeline -------- Original Message -------- On 20 February 2018 12:11 PM, <philippe.fouquart@orange.com> wrote:

Dear Heather, colleagues,

Thanks for putting this together, more than a report, this is a detailed workplan.

Just a thought. Maybe this should have urls with the annexes or in a references section (to things like bylaws, the operating procedures, the working group guidelines, the PDP manual, the FY19 budget).

I’m sure it’s obvious here but the document will be worthwhile circulating on our constituency and we regularly have new comers in the audience who may be discouraged after the third google lookup for things they’re missing.

Other than that no comment other than a typo on page 14, “INTA” should be NTIA.

Regards,

Philippe

From: council [mailto:council-bounces@gnso.icann.org] On Behalf Of Heather Forrest Sent: Tuesday, February 20, 2018 6:47 AM To: GNSO Council List Subject: [council] Draft GNSO Council Strategic Planning Session Report for your review and comment

Dear colleagues,

Attached please find a draft report of our three-day strategic planning session in January, as prepared by Marika, Rafik and myself. (Donna is currently on leave, and will provide input on her return - we're keen to get this out as soon as possible, so will absorb her input and suggestions as we work through input from you all)

I have attached a PDF version and MS Word version - the PDF contains all annexes, but the Word version is missing an annex due to formatting constraints. Please feel free to provide input in whatever form or format works best for you.

Sincere thanks again to all for making the three days so productive,

Heather

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci.

This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.