Thanks Alan.
A Minor point in the Staff intro: the CPWG is mentioned several times, without a mention that it is the acronym for the At-Large Consolidated Policy Working Group. Not a big deal at all.
Kindest regards,

Olivier

On 20/07/2021 01:45, Alan Greenberg via CPWG wrote:
The comment was submitted. The contents can be found at https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_EPaFDv46r8HEq3Rj7fY0IZmkYy63zMiIIGPalF5jPY/edit#.

The only changes from the earlier versions are:

1. In the first answer, the objection to there being a Recommendation is moved to the top.

2. In the last answer, a paragraph was added about the concept of following rules instead of aiming at good policy.

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