Hello Hadia and Alan,


Thank you for clarifying the timeline and presentation shared on CPWG vs the draft between you and Hadia. We can relay any updates to the CPWG this week, please let us know.


Best,

Evin

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From: Hadia Abdelsalam Mokhtar EL miniawi <Hadia@tra.gov.eg>
Sent: Monday, December 6, 2021 7:34:15 AM
To: Alan Greenberg; Evin Erdogdu; cpwg@icann.org
Cc: ICANN At-Large Staff; Olivier MJ Crépin-Leblond; Jonathan Zuck
Subject: [Ext] RE: ACTION/CPWG by Dec 8 - Final Feedback on Responses re: ALAC Advice on EPDP Phase 2 (SSAD)
 
Alan, correct I did not include any of your text nor did I delete anything I just added my own. Let’s work on it together. I am available today until 14:00 UTC then I am available again from 21:00 UTC ( I think this time might work better for you) alternatively tomorrow I am available for most of the day and evening
 
Best
Hadia 
 
From: Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca>
Sent: Monday, December 6, 2021 6:53 AM
To: Evin Erdogdu <evin.erdogdu@icann.org>; cpwg@icann.org
Cc: ICANN At-Large Staff <staff@atlarge.icann.org>; Hadia Abdelsalam Mokhtar EL miniawi <Hadia@tra.gov.eg>; Olivier MJ Crépin-Leblond <ocl@gih.com>; Jonathan Zuck <JZuck@innovatorsnetwork.org>
Subject: Re: ACTION/CPWG by Dec 8 - Final Feedback on Responses re: ALAC Advice on EPDP Phase 2 (SSAD)
 
Evin and Hadia,

I am rather confused.

First, I do not recall agreeing that we will finalize the responses this week.

Second, I prepared some text as the first draft. Parts of it are in the Google Doc, and parts are missing. I have suggest only access to this document and cannot look at its history, but it appears that Hadia added some text but not deleted any, so where did my text go?

I think what happened is that Evin took my PowerPoint presentation (and not the fully fleshed out responses I sent to Hadia) and presumed that these short-hand presentation slides were the responses to the Board. And then Hadia added some additional text.

This is not satisfactory! I suggest that we put this on hold until Hadia and I can formulate something that fully addresses all of the issues.

Alan




At 2021-12-03 06:42 PM, Evin Erdogdu wrote:

Hello CPWG Members,

As per the 1 December meeting, please finally review responses to the Board clarifying questions regarding the ALAC advice on EPDP Phase 2 (SSAD):

See: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wgbaQJjw6c6dQ6FPgNrsJ4pgEnBCdoWncY6BNnJ4ktI/edit?usp=sharing [docs.google.com]

On 8 December Alan and Hadia will finalize the responses with feedback with the CPWG, with the goal of providing final responses to Board the following week, in mid-December.

Thank you,

Evin Ashley Erdo»du

Policy Analyst

Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)