The SSAC has published comments on the EPDP. They are very much in line with what we have focused on and I strongly recommend that those who are interested review the paper.

https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/sac-111-en.pdf ("SSAC Comment on the Initial Report of the Temporary Specification for gTLD Registration Data Phase 2 Expedited Policy Development Process").

Alan