Dear CPWG Members, As mentioned during the 21 August 2024 CPWG call<https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=368672854>, please find linked below Steinar Grøtterød’s revised text for Transfer Policy Review Initial Report recommendation #33. Please provide any comments you may have in the document linked below. The Initial Report on the Transfer Policy Review public comment<https://www.icann.org/en/public-comment/proceeding/initial-report-on-the-tra...> proceeding will continue to be discussed during upcoming CPWG calls. Revised Recommendation 33 Text: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YCfmbtlcsOkpk-wJZ_MjYSk0CDVYTm53wgqerDrA... Please let us know if you have any questions. Sincerely, Andrew -- Andrew Chen Policy Development Support Sr. Specialist, Policy Development Support Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) https://www.icann.org/ Skype: atchen122