Hi everyone,
Following our discussion earlier today, I made a quick revision of the attached. Editorial changes I’d say:
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Have attempted to include Debbie’s suggestion on section 6 to remove “possible”.
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We need to make sure that under 10 the number of [public] sessions matches our discussion
Regarding the point of how CSC may review the KPIs and metrics moving forward, I believe this falls under 3.C.i , but tend to think this belongs to
the review itself rather than to the methodology so I didn’t change the text. I’d suggest we keep this for the review itself.
Regards,
Philippe
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Dear Effectiveness Review Team,
Please find the draft template CSC Effectiveness Review document.
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Ria
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