I’m happy with Keith’s changes

From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Drazek, Keith via CSC-Review
Sent: 08 December 2017 14:19
To: bart.boswinkel@icann.org; CSC-review@icann.org
Subject: Re: [CSC-Review] CSC Review Team Notes, 16 November

Good morning/afternoon all.

Thanks to everyone who contributed to this document. I have reviewed it and it looks good. I added a few suggested edits in the attached.

Let me know if you have any questions about my proposed edits.

Best,

Keith

From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Bart Boswinkel
Sent: Friday, December 08, 2017 4:03 AM
To: CSC-review@icann.org
Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [CSC-Review] CSC Review Team Notes, 16 November

Dear all,

Please find included the latest version of the consolidated comments on the CSC charter, including Martin’s additional comments

@ Keith: could you be so kind to look at document?

Kind regards,

Bart

From: CSC-Review <csc-review-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Martin Boyle via CSC-Review <CSC-review@icann.org>
Reply-To: Martin Boyle <martin.boyle.hertford@ntlworld.com>
Date: Friday 24 November 2017 at 01:06
To: Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org>, "CSC-review@icann.org" <CSC-review@icann.org>
Subject: Re: [CSC-Review] CSC Review Team Notes, 16 November

I think that item 4 was for me to comment on Donna’s comments:  just missed completing the attached in time!

From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Maria Otanes
Sent: 17 November 2017 17:34
To: CSC-review@icann.org
Subject: [CSC-Review] CSC Review Team Notes, 16 November

Dear CSC Review Team,

Attached, please find notes from yesterday’s call. Next Steps can be found below.

Have a wonderful weekend,

Ria

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Timeline for next steps

Who ?	What?	When to be completed?
Abdala, Keith	provide comments on charter	20 November
Donna	provide high level description of issues	21 November
Bart	description of process, ToR and basic info	22 November
Martin	Check description Donna	23 November
Bart	Detail high level issues identified using comments document	24 November
Donna, Bart	Prepare draft initial CSC report	1 December
Donna, Abdala	Consolidate changes to charter	1 December
Martin, Keith	Comment initial draft CSC review team report	6 December
CSC review team	Discuss report and	7 December
Bart	Consolidate proposed changes	8 December (by 17.00 UTC)
Donna	Finalise report ad send draft to CSC	8 December
CSC review team	Meeting with CSC to discuss draft findings	14 December 20.00 UTC