I realise that this is too late for the deadline and (given the time and Donna’s imminent absence) I’m not expecting this to be picked up in time for the meeting with the CSC, but I thought it would be worth finishing a read through of the text and suggesting revisions for the next round.

A marked-up copy is attached.

Best

Martin

From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Maria Otanes
Sent: 06 February 2018 19:43
To: CSC-review@icann.org
Subject: [CSC-Review] CSC RT updated docs

Hello CSC Review team,

As discussed, please find updated docs attached.

AC recording: https://participate.icann.org/p9lyoz1xy2j/

Best,

Ria