Thanks Bart,

I have annotated the proposed changes as requested:  nothing major, but there are a few points where we need to poll to see if there is any agreement with my interpretation!  I’ve put in comments to (try to) help you interpret my assessments.

Hope this helps

Martin

From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Bart Boswinkel
Sent: 19 January 2018 10:28
To: CSC-review@icann.org
Subject: [CSC-Review] Overview of proposed changes

Dear all,

Please find included the amended document of proposed changes (version 02).

It now includes:

• All proposals/comments are numbered (1-24)
• the 2^nd column an indication of the proposer ( CSC or RT)
• The 3^rd column to be used to mark as agreed (green), further discussion needed (amber), not supported (red)
• Added 7^th column which you can use for your comments.

Please provide your feed-back and comments by Tuesday 23 January.

As said the overview of proposals is a combination of the changes proposed by the CSC following their internal review of the charter, and the proposals/comments from the RT, as included in the annotated charter.  For your reference, I have included the latest version of the annotated charter,

Kind regards,

Bart