My review attached here as well.

From: Martin Boyle [mailto:martin.boyle.hertford@ntlworld.com]
Sent: Wednesday, November 15, 2017 3:49 AM
To: CSC-review@icann.org
Cc: 'Bart Boswinkel' <bart.boswinkel@icann.org>; Austin, Donna <Donna.Austin@team.neustar>
Subject: [EXTERNAL] RE: [CSC-Review] Notes and other material

Hi all,

As suggested at our meeting in Abu Dhabi (and as Donna has reminded us in her first paragraph) I attach my first stab at incorporating changes.

I hope this helps and look forward to our discussion tomorrow.

Best

Martin

From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Austin, Donna via CSC-Review
Sent: 14 November 2017 18:15
To: Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org>; CSC-review@icann.org
Subject: Re: [CSC-Review] Notes and other material

Thanks Bart

Could you provide a clean word version of the CSC Charter so that Keith, Martin, Abdulla and myself can review and suggest changes please. If I recall our discussion in Abu Dhabi, we thought it would be a good idea for each of us to individually review the Charter.

Based on Elaine’s comments it would seem that the CSC_Charter with Notes August 2.docx is out-of-date. Could you please confirm?

My preference moving forward is that the RT consider all the comments/input we’ve received, discuss the merits and then develop a redline of the Charter that we can share with the CSC and PTI before putting it out for public comment.

Donna

From: csc-review-bounces@icann.org [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Bart Boswinkel
Sent: Friday, November 10, 2017 3:50 AM
To: csc-review@icann.org
Subject: [EXTERNAL] [CSC-Review] Notes and other material

Dear all,

Hope you home flight was uneventful.

Per discussion in Abu Dhabi included the notes from the meetings to date and to ensure you have a copy the suggestion from CS itself on charter improvements.

Unfortunately I have not recovered noted from your conversation with Elise (yet).

Kind regards,

Bart