Hello all, 

I will send out meeting notes shortly, but in the interest of time, particularly for the 4 of you who volunteered to wordsmith certain sections, I'm attaching the latest redline.

As noted on the call, edits are due today (11 August) at 23:59 UTC. Please send to the list and I will incorporate them into a new redline for final review by the group. 

Thank you, 

Grace