One thing that just struck me was the Working Group’s name.  Currently it is “Cross Community Working Group to Develop an IANA Stewardship Transition Proposal”.  To avoid an confusion, I suggest that we add a reference to the ‘naming community’ to make it clear that we are not focussing on addressing or protocol parameters.  It could be something like “Cross Community Working Group to Develop an IANA Stewardship Transition Proposal on Naming Related Functions”

From: cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Grace Abuhamad
Sent: August-12-14 2:01 PM
To: Grace Abuhamad; CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org
Subject: [CWG-DT-Stewardship] 6 hours left -- Final Edits due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August

Hi all, 

Just a quick reminder that we are 6h away from our final edits deadline. 

From: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad@icann.org>
Date: Monday, August 11, 2014 9:59 PM
To: "CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org" <CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org>
Subject: [CWG-DT-Stewardship] Latest Draft Charter -- Final Edits due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August (in 22 hours!)

Hi all, 

Attached are two versions of the updated draft charter (redline and clean). 

I used Stephanie's "minor edits" document as the base for the rest of the proposed changes. I've outlined the changes I made for your reference:  

• Section II: Included Julie's text (first sentence of "Goals & Objectives" section)
• Section III: Deleted everything except for the first sentence in point 2 of the work plan, upon Chuck's suggestion.
• Section IV: 

• Included Stephanie's text. 
• Completed text relating to staff assignment in "Staffing & Resources" (Grace/Staff). 
• Included Allan's text on resourcing (can the DT confirm the placement of the text in the charter?). 

Note: I am missing text from Byron, but I left the text discussed on the call as a placeholder. 

Final edits are due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August (in 22 hours!).

Please let me know if you would like to schedule a final call.   

- Grace