I think this is fine but suggest that we state what is in scope first, i.e., mainly changing the order of the wording:
“The accountability function currently performed by NTIA regarding the RZM role, as well as the discussion of the RZM management administrative interface currently used by NTIA are within the scope of
the CWG. The issue of who performs the Root Zone Maintainer (RZM) role is not in scope for the CWG and should be dealt with in a subsequent effort as needed.”
Note that I also left out the reference to ICANN. I would like to think that ICANN will continue to perform the IANA role but if they refuse real accountability we need to keep the option open that it could
change. The IANA function is the main leverage we have to motivate them to accept independent accountability.
Chuck
From: cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]
On Behalf Of Tijani BEN JEMAA
Sent: Saturday, August 02, 2014 6:07 AM
To: 'Avri Doria'; CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org
Subject: Re: [CWG-DT-Stewardship] Recommended language related to RZM role discussions in CWG
Hello Avri and Chuck,
What about:
While the issue of who performs the Root Zone Maintainer (RZM) role is not in scope for the CWG and should be dealt with in a
subsequent effort as needed, the accountability function currently performed by NTIA regarding the RZM role, as well as the discussion of the administrative interface between ICANN and the RZM management function, are within the scope of the CWG.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Tijani BEN JEMAA
Executive Director
Mediterranean Federation of Internet Associations
(FMAI)
Phone: + 216 41 649 605
Mobile: + 216 98 330 114
Fax: + 216 70 853 376
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
-----Message d'origine-----
De : cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org
[mailto:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org] De la part de Avri Doria
Envoyé : jeudi 31 juillet 2014 19:57
À : CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org
Objet : [CWG-DT-Stewardship] Recommended language related to RZM role discussions in CWG
Hi,
The following is language that chuck and I worked on to complete our
assignment:
The accountability function currently performed by NTIA regarding the
Root Zone Maintainer (RZM) role is within the scope of the CWG. While
the issue of who performs the RZM role is not in scope for the CWG and
should be dealt with in a subsequent effort as needed, discussion of the
administrative interface between ICANN and the RZM management function
is within scope.
Thanks
avri
_______________________________________________
CWG-DT-Stewardship mailing list
https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/cwg-dt-stewardship
|
|
Ce courrier électronique ne contient aucun virus ou logiciel malveillant parce que la protection
Antivirus avast! est active. |
