Hi all, 

Attached are two versions of the updated draft charter (redline and clean). 

I used Stephanie's "minor edits" document as the base for the rest of the proposed changes. I've outlined the changes I made for your reference:  
Note: I am missing text from Byron, but I left the text discussed on the call as a placeholder. 
 
Final edits are due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August (in 22 hours!). 


Please let me know if you would like to schedule a final call.   
- Grace