With the exception of Byron’s promised word-smithing that he promised and the changes to the title that Allan suggested, which should also be made within the document where applicable, I think this is ready to go. 

Chuck

From: cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Grace Abuhamad
Sent: Monday, August 11, 2014 10:00 PM
To: CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org
Subject: [CWG-DT-Stewardship] Latest Draft Charter -- Final Edits due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August (in 22 hours!)

Hi all, 

Attached are two versions of the updated draft charter (redline and clean). 

I used Stephanie's "minor edits" document as the base for the rest of the proposed changes. I've outlined the changes I made for your reference:  

• Section II: Included Julie's text (first sentence of "Goals & Objectives" section)
• Section III: Deleted everything except for the first sentence in point 2 of the work plan, upon Chuck's suggestion.
• Section IV: 
  • Included Stephanie's text. 
  • Completed text relating to staff assignment in "Staffing & Resources" (Grace/Staff). 
  • Included Allan's text on resourcing (can the DT confirm the placement of the text in the charter?). 

Note: I am missing text from Byron, but I left the text discussed on the call as a placeholder. 

Final edits are due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August (in 22 hours!).

Please let me know if you would like to schedule a final call.   

- Grace