Hi Greg,

Olive office on my android handled is obviously not displaying the footnote referred. In anycase I am still fine with what you have noted so long as 9i wordings is maintained as it currently is.

Regards

sent from Google nexus 4
kindly excuse brevity and typos.

On 6 Apr 2015 19:52, "Greg Shatan" <gregshatanipc@gmail.com> wrote:
All.

I have read this draft and I have no objections.  I have made a few non-substantive "clean-up" changes in the attached draft, picking up Eduardo's comments (though I did not find the "tabs" to be an issue), adding a couple of headings where the format of the document dictates it, making some very minor clarifying changes in the newly-revised title and intro paragraph, and fixing some typos.

In response to Seun's comment, I note that footnote 1 defines the IANA functions operator as "the unit that provides the service."

With these changes, I find the document acceptable.

Greg Shatan

On Mon, Apr 6, 2015 at 1:59 PM, Andrew Sullivan <ajs@anvilwalrusden.com> wrote:
Dear colleagues,

I've read this draft of the principles, and I think it should be
accepted this way.

Best regards,

A

On Thu, Apr 02, 2015 at 06:50:09PM +0200, Lise Fuhr wrote:
> Dear All,
>
>
>
> As announced at the CWG conference call today, the latest draft of the
> Principles is hereby sent to the list. Please be aware that there is a
> deadline for the conclusion of the Principles on Friday 10th of April, and
> we have had several iterations on the document.
>
>
>
> As Martin Boyle mentioned in his email of March 24th , this is a compromise
> among many parties, so please have this in mind when reading.
>
>
>
> I resend the redlined version with comments and a clean version. If no
> objections are posted online by Friday April 10th , 12:00 UTC, the
> Principles will be considered as finalized and agreed upon by the CWG.
>
>
>
> Best regards,
>
> Lise
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