Thank you very much Greg.  Because your edits were formatting and not content changes, I definitely agree that it was best to not use the redlining function.  Redlining would have made it very confusing.

All:  please use Greg’s version to submit any edits you may have and please use the redline function.

Chuck

From: Greg Shatan [mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com]
Sent: Friday, November 14, 2014 12:26 PM
To: Gomes, Chuck
Cc: cwg-stewardship@icann.org
Subject: Re: [CWG-Stewardship] FW: CWG RFP2B Proposal

Chuck and All,

I have attached a revised version RFP2B.  Primarily, I took certain sections of the text (primarily those involving lists) and converted those sections to tables.  Due to quirks in the interaction between tables and track changes, I did not make these changes in track changes.  However, I think it will be fairly obvious where these changes are, especially since there were no tables in this document beforehand.

One reason for this change is that, in preparing RFP3, we will need to consider how these existing aspects oversight and accountability will be dealt with in our transition proposal.  It will be easier to take these charts and add additional columns to show this. 

I did make a few minor editing changes as well.  These are marked in track changes.

Greg Shatan

On Fri, Nov 14, 2014 at 11:35 AM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@verisign.com> wrote:

Edits need to be received not later than 1800 UTC, Monday, 17 November.  Earlier would be appreciated.

Chuck

From: cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Gomes, Chuck
Sent: Tuesday, November 11, 2014 8:19 AM
To: cwg-stewardship@icann.org
Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] CWG RFP2B Proposal
Importance: High

Here is a draft of the ICG RFP Section 2B proposal for full CWG review and discussion.  Please make any suggested edits using the Word redlining function and save the file with your name before sending it to the CWG list.  Questions and comments  are also welcome on this list before you make edits.

Chuck

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