Dear All,

Please find attached version 2 of the proposal for your review which includes amongst others:

Jonathan’s edits
Paragraph 102 — CWG edits
Paragraph 106 — Martin addition
Paragraph 111— Martin addition
Paragraph 150 — CWG edits
Paragraph 226 (Annex F) — Martin addition
Paragraph 233 table — Martin addition
Updated Section VI
Updates from DT F concerning root zone maintainer and root zone environment
Suggested changes to address Andrew’s comments in paragraph 96 and 107
Updates to Annex F
Updates to Annex J per DT M’s feedback

Please note that there are still some outstanding items that we expect to update as soon as input is received, for example from DT C concerning the CSC Charter, paragraph 123 (note action item for Avri), outstanding issue in Annex J under discussion by DT M and C, DT A input concerning Annex H, but we already wanted to give you an opportunity to review these latests updates. Furthermore, we will continue working on proofreading and formatting of the document and annexes.

Please share any comments and/or edits you have with the mailing list.

Best regards,

Marika