Hi Marika,

I have some comments and proposed changes to section IV. Please see attached document.

Best,

Lise

Fra: cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org] På vegne af Marika Konings
Sendt: 3. juni 2015 16:32
Til: cwg-stewardship@icann.org
Emne: Re: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review - CWG-Stewardship Proposal v2

Apologies, someone just pointed out I attached the wrong document. Please find attached version 2. You can ignore the document I sent you in the previous email, the work on the public comment review tool has not been completed yet.

Best regards,

Marika

From: Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org>
Date: Wednesday 3 June 2015 16:08
To: "cwg-stewardship@icann.org" <cwg-stewardship@icann.org>
Subject: For your review - CWG-Stewardship Proposal v2

Dear All,

Please find attached version 2 of the proposal for your review which includes amongst others:

• Jonathan’s edits
• Paragraph 102 — CWG edits
• Paragraph 106 — Martin addition
• Paragraph 111— Martin addition
• Paragraph 150 — CWG edits
• Paragraph 226 (Annex F) — Martin addition
• Paragraph 233 table — Martin addition
• Updated Section VI 
• Updates from DT F concerning root zone maintainer and root zone environment
• Suggested changes to address Andrew’s comments in paragraph 96 and 107
• Updates to Annex F
• Updates to Annex J per DT M’s feedback

Please note that there are still some outstanding items that we expect to update as soon as input is received, for example from DT C concerning the CSC Charter, paragraph 123 (note action item for Avri), outstanding issue in Annex J under discussion by DT M and C, DT A input concerning Annex H, but we already wanted to give you an opportunity to review these latests updates. Furthermore, we will continue working on proofreading and formatting of the document and annexes. 

Please share any comments and/or edits you have with the mailing list.

Best regards,

Marika