Thanks, Donna. I’ve updated the flow chart (see attached) in relation to your comments on pages 1, 2 and 4  which I believe are minor changes and in line what was discussed in Frankfurt (on page 4, I changed ‘prepare' to ‘post' as I think that aligns with the intent of your comment?). In relation to your comments on page 5, those sound like details that may be better suited for the actual written proposal and not necessarily the flow chart? I’ve posted those comments here below so that it may be easier for others to review and comment.

Best regards,

Marika

Page 5 – Entering into Contract (Transition) - Comments from Donna Austin: 

From: Donna Austin <Donna.Austin@ariservices.com>
Date: Thursday 20 November 2014 17:37
To: "cwg-stewardship@icann.org" <cwg-stewardship@icann.org>
Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] Comments on IANA Transition Flow Chart

All

 

I have a few comments on the IANA Transition Flow Chart that I’ve attached here for consideration.

 

Thanks,

 

Donna

 

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Marika

 

I’ve made some comments on the attached. Let me know if you can’t access the comments.

 

Thanks

 

Donna