Alan, Something needs fixing in 2.b on page 2: "DT-F recommends that for internal or communications and reporting processes . . ." Should 'or' be deleted? You could just replace the sentence with the following one in the corresponding item on page 4: "DT-F further recommends that for changes internal to IANA and for those related to reports and communications, no external approval shall be needed. " Chuck -----Original Message----- From: cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Alan Greenberg Sent: Friday, April 17, 2015 12:16 PM To: CWG IANA Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] DT-F Recommendations Attached. Some clean-up is still required, but this version will suffice if no more time is available. Alan