Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Version 2 of RFP Section 2A with redlined edits
All I've uploaded the document to the Wiki here <https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/49352017/CWG-RFP2A-10NOVED ITS-RedLine.docx?api=v2> for your sharing/downloading convenience. From: <Gomes>, Chuck <cgomes@verisign.com> Date: Tuesday, November 11, 2014 2:24 PM To: "cwg-stewardship@icann.org" <cwg-stewardship@icann.org> Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] Version 2 of RFP Section 2A with redlined edits Here is version 2 of the draft proposal in response to Section 2A of the ICG RFP; note that all edits made to the original version sent to the CWG list are redlined to make it easy for everyone to see the changes made. If you proposed edits and they were not made, please speak up. Questions and comments are welcome on this list. If you want to propose additional edits, please create a clean version of the file, make the edits on the clean version, save the file with your name and send it to this list. We will create a version three the first of next week if needed. Thanks to Bernie for all the time he spent creating version 2. Chuck ³This message (including any attachments) is intended only for the use of the individual or entity to which it is addressed, and may contain information that is non-public, proprietary, privileged, confidential and exempt from disclosure under applicable law or may be constituted as attorney work product. If you are not the intended recipient, you are hereby notified that any use, dissemination, distribution, or copying of this communication is strictly prohibited. If you have received this message in error, notify sender immediately and delete this message immediately.²
Here are some proposed edits. The document also contains a few comments where additional edits might be made. From: cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Grace Abuhamad Sent: Tuesday, November 11, 2014 6:49 PM To: Gomes, Chuck; cwg-stewardship@icann.org Subject: Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Version 2 of RFP Section 2A with redlined edits Importance: High All - I've uploaded the document to the Wiki here<https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/49352017/CWG-RFP2A-10NOVEDI...> for your sharing/downloading convenience. From: <Gomes>, Chuck <cgomes@verisign.com<mailto:cgomes@verisign.com>> Date: Tuesday, November 11, 2014 2:24 PM To: "cwg-stewardship@icann.org<mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org>" <cwg-stewardship@icann.org<mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org>> Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] Version 2 of RFP Section 2A with redlined edits Here is version 2 of the draft proposal in response to Section 2A of the ICG RFP; note that all edits made to the original version sent to the CWG list are redlined to make it easy for everyone to see the changes made. If you proposed edits and they were not made, please speak up. Questions and comments are welcome on this list. If you want to propose additional edits, please create a clean version of the file, make the edits on the clean version, save the file with your name and send it to this list. We will create a version three the first of next week if needed. Thanks to Bernie for all the time he spent creating version 2. Chuck "This message (including any attachments) is intended only for the use of the individual or entity to which it is addressed, and may contain information that is non-public, proprietary, privileged, confidential and exempt from disclosure under applicable law or may be constituted as attorney work product. If you are not the intended recipient, you are hereby notified that any use, dissemination, distribution, or copying of this communication is strictly prohibited. If you have received this message in error, notify sender immediately and delete this message immediately."
Thanks Milton for taking the time to do this and for doing it as a redline to the document. In my quick review of Milton's suggested edits and comments, with the exception of two that I think are minor edits that remove redundancy, the rest all seem to relate to ccTLD issues so I would like to encourage responses from ccTLD members and participants in the CWG. In particular, please communicate if you disagree with any of his edits or comments and if so state your rationale. Please add your responses to his comments or edits to his redlined version. It's okay if you add comments in agreement with his suggestions in the document as well but it is especially important to identify areas of disagreement; if none are identified we will assume that his edits and comments are accepted by the CWG. Chuck From: Milton L Mueller [mailto:mueller@syr.edu] Sent: Wednesday, November 12, 2014 10:38 AM To: Gomes, Chuck; cwg-stewardship@icann.org Subject: RE: [CWG-Stewardship] Version 2 of RFP Section 2A with redlined edits Here are some proposed edits. The document also contains a few comments where additional edits might be made. From: cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org<mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]<mailto:[mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]> On Behalf Of Grace Abuhamad Sent: Tuesday, November 11, 2014 6:49 PM To: Gomes, Chuck; cwg-stewardship@icann.org<mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org> Subject: Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Version 2 of RFP Section 2A with redlined edits Importance: High All - I've uploaded the document to the Wiki here<https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/49352017/CWG-RFP2A-10NOVEDI...> for your sharing/downloading convenience. From: <Gomes>, Chuck <cgomes@verisign.com<mailto:cgomes@verisign.com>> Date: Tuesday, November 11, 2014 2:24 PM To: "cwg-stewardship@icann.org<mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org>" <cwg-stewardship@icann.org<mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org>> Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] Version 2 of RFP Section 2A with redlined edits Here is version 2 of the draft proposal in response to Section 2A of the ICG RFP; note that all edits made to the original version sent to the CWG list are redlined to make it easy for everyone to see the changes made. If you proposed edits and they were not made, please speak up. Questions and comments are welcome on this list. If you want to propose additional edits, please create a clean version of the file, make the edits on the clean version, save the file with your name and send it to this list. We will create a version three the first of next week if needed. Thanks to Bernie for all the time he spent creating version 2. Chuck "This message (including any attachments) is intended only for the use of the individual or entity to which it is addressed, and may contain information that is non-public, proprietary, privileged, confidential and exempt from disclosure under applicable law or may be constituted as attorney work product. If you are not the intended recipient, you are hereby notified that any use, dissemination, distribution, or copying of this communication is strictly prohibited. If you have received this message in error, notify sender immediately and delete this message immediately."
Milton, Per Chuck's request please find the answer to some of your questions/suggestions in the attached document. Please advise if you have any questions. Thanks B. On Wed, Nov 12, 2014 at 10:38 AM, Milton L Mueller <mueller@syr.edu> wrote:
Here are some proposed edits. The document also contains a few comments where additional edits might be made.
*From:* cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto: cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org] *On Behalf Of *Grace Abuhamad *Sent:* Tuesday, November 11, 2014 6:49 PM *To:* Gomes, Chuck; cwg-stewardship@icann.org *Subject:* Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Version 2 of RFP Section 2A with redlined edits *Importance:* High
All — I've uploaded the document to the Wiki here <https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/49352017/CWG-RFP2A-10NOVEDI...> for your sharing/downloading convenience.
*From: *<Gomes>, Chuck <cgomes@verisign.com> *Date: *Tuesday, November 11, 2014 2:24 PM *To: *"cwg-stewardship@icann.org" <cwg-stewardship@icann.org> *Subject: *[CWG-Stewardship] Version 2 of RFP Section 2A with redlined edits
Here is version 2 of the draft proposal in response to Section 2A of the ICG RFP; note that all edits made to the original version sent to the CWG list are redlined to make it easy for everyone to see the changes made. If you proposed edits and they were not made, please speak up.
Questions and comments are welcome on this list. If you want to propose additional edits, please create a clean version of the file, make the edits on the clean version, save the file with your name and send it to this list. We will create a version three the first of next week if needed.
Thanks to Bernie for all the time he spent creating version 2.
Chuck “This message (including any attachments) is intended only for the use of the individual or entity to which it is addressed, and may contain information that is non-public, proprietary, privileged, confidential and exempt from disclosure under applicable law or may be constituted as attorney work product. If you are not the intended recipient, you are hereby notified that any use, dissemination, distribution, or copying of this communication is strictly prohibited. If you have received this message in error, notify sender immediately and delete this message immediately.”
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Your answers on ICP-1 and GAC Principles 7.1 are fine by me. --MM From: Bernard Turcotte [mailto:turcotte.bernard@gmail.com] Sent: Thursday, November 13, 2014 1:03 PM To: Milton L Mueller Cc: Gomes, Chuck; cwg-stewardship@icann.org Subject: Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Version 2 of RFP Section 2A with redlined edits Milton, Per Chuck's request please find the answer to some of your questions/suggestions in the attached document. Please advise if you have any questions. Thanks B. On Wed, Nov 12, 2014 at 10:38 AM, Milton L Mueller <mueller@syr.edu<mailto:mueller@syr.edu>> wrote: Here are some proposed edits. The document also contains a few comments where additional edits might be made. From: cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org<mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org<mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org>] On Behalf Of Grace Abuhamad Sent: Tuesday, November 11, 2014 6:49 PM To: Gomes, Chuck; cwg-stewardship@icann.org<mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org> Subject: Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Version 2 of RFP Section 2A with redlined edits Importance: High All — I've uploaded the document to the Wiki here<https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/49352017/CWG-RFP2A-10NOVEDI...> for your sharing/downloading convenience. From: <Gomes>, Chuck <cgomes@verisign.com<mailto:cgomes@verisign.com>> Date: Tuesday, November 11, 2014 2:24 PM To: "cwg-stewardship@icann.org<mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org>" <cwg-stewardship@icann.org<mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org>> Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] Version 2 of RFP Section 2A with redlined edits Here is version 2 of the draft proposal in response to Section 2A of the ICG RFP; note that all edits made to the original version sent to the CWG list are redlined to make it easy for everyone to see the changes made. If you proposed edits and they were not made, please speak up. Questions and comments are welcome on this list. If you want to propose additional edits, please create a clean version of the file, make the edits on the clean version, save the file with your name and send it to this list. We will create a version three the first of next week if needed. Thanks to Bernie for all the time he spent creating version 2. Chuck “This message (including any attachments) is intended only for the use of the individual or entity to which it is addressed, and may contain information that is non-public, proprietary, privileged, confidential and exempt from disclosure under applicable law or may be constituted as attorney work product. If you are not the intended recipient, you are hereby notified that any use, dissemination, distribution, or copying of this communication is strictly prohibited. If you have received this message in error, notify sender immediately and delete this message immediately.” _______________________________________________ CWG-Stewardship mailing list CWG-Stewardship@icann.org<mailto:CWG-Stewardship@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/cwg-stewardship
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