first page: “aCyrillic” - separate “a” with space or just remove it.
Contents: space after “Appendix” (B, C, D)
page 3: space in “Europeand” “than250” “tothe”. I don’t want to catch all such cases - better run a grammar check.
page 5: “code point, which” - remove comma.
pahe 7: Bahkir -> Bashkir
page 8: Abhaz -> Abkhaz (multple occurences)
page 11: (formatting) move table heading to next page (headless now)
page 12: fix some names:
Kohmanzuk -> s/z/y/ ;
Bazyankov -> s/z/zl/ ;
Александр Хмыль - change to Latin (perhaps keep Cyrillic version? This may be good idea for other names!)
Yuri Kargapolov - add to list as contributor (affiliation and email is in list archives.)
general: alphabetise list by last name, in Latin (or Cyrillic? :)
question: should we add other members of group? should we mention ICANN staff, Sarmad and Alireza?
page 16;
insert space in:
"AppendixB"
edit “administrators of ccTLDs (technical administrator of ccTLDs .BY
and .БЕЛ, same from .UA and .УКР)"
- replace with “administrators of following ccTLDs: (list)” (otherwise, one can think that BY and UA has same admins :)
Here, the important part is that multiple countries are affected.. perhaps "administrators of ccTLDs in two countries, Belarus and Ukraine”?
replace "This character is a real part of Belarusian written language” with "of Belarusian and Ukrainian written languages”
replace "in particular, the Ukraine
and Russia.” with “in particular, Russia”.
NOTE: there is no the Ukraine, like the Russia or the Serbia (whereas there were “the Soviet Union” and “the Yugoslavia” and are “the United States”).
page 18:
insert space in “AppendixC”
pages 20-25: not reviwed (somebody must do this Herculean task)
page 26: heading “Latin” must be something else, we already have plain Latin at page 23.
Thank everybody!