Few recommendations from my side:

Delete: "

[The Initial Report should be submitted to the relevant Data Protection Authorities to request feedback on the applicability of the law in relation to the proposed recommendations]." (just noticed this part is already deleted)

Delete: Consistent with ICANN’s Bylaws and replace with Outcome of Temp Spec must support ICANN's Bylaws

Delete: "obviously" from

Not obviously in violation of GDPR / Assumed to be compliant with GDPR [Presumed to be legal according to the members’ best knowledge of GDPR]" or write: In alignment with GDPR - or In alignment with for ICANN relevant key parts of GDPR

Clarify meaning of 'concerns of individuals in the group'

Solicit and communicate (where appropriate) the views and concerns of individuals in the group that appoints them;

On Tue, Jun 26, 2018 at 10:08 AM, Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org> wrote:

Dear All,

As discussed, you can view the latest version of the charter template here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1krM9egtdseUtXjEii2sth4syu97gNJZFqTIlvNMwfJg/edit?usp=sharing. Note that some edits / additions have been made by staff reflecting earlier tentative agreements. Topic leads, please send any proposed text for your section based on today’s discussion to staff so we can integrate it in the document for review and consideration by the DT later today. As noted before, the text in the template is intended to provide a starting point, but you are free to modify/delete as appropriate.

Best regards,

Marika

Marika Konings

Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)

Email: marika.konings@icann.org

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