Reminder – please make sure that you review the input received to date on the different sections of the charter that can be found in the google docs listed below and add any perspectives that may be missing. Similarly, if you have any proposals for compromise language that addresses the different viewpoints expressed, please add your proposals to the google doc.

Thanks,

Marika

From: Epdp-dt <epdp-dt-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Caitlin Tubergen <caitlin.tubergen@icann.org>
Date: Thursday, June 28, 2018 at 17:50
To: "Austin, Donna via Epdp-dt" <epdp-dt@icann.org>
Subject: [Epdp-dt] EPDP Charter Templates for providing additional feedback

Dear Drafting Team Members,

Thank you for all of your work at ICANN62.

In an effort to catalogue feedback in one place and avoid version control issues, ICANN Staff has created Google Doc templates that you may use to continue to provide feedback on the draft charter. Each template provides:

The current text in the charter
A section for comments/concerns/feedback
Proposed compromise text (if any)

The templates are divided by category so that you will be able to zero in on the categories you would like to provide additional feedback on. Additionally, multiple templates prevent one template from becoming too long and unwieldy.

We have done our best to input the comments received via the list so far, but please feel free to comment on the text if your feedback was inadvertently omitted.

If you would like to provide additional feedback, please be sure to put your name next to the feedback so it is clear who is making the suggestion(s).

Here are the links to the templates:

If you have any questions or concerns, please let me know.

Kind regards, and safe travels,

Caitlin

Caitlin Tubergen

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