For those reviewing the redline version, please note that this should include all minor edits that have been suggested in the individual google docs as well as some other updates resulting from previous agreements or parallel efforts that have been explained in the form of comments. Similarly, those items that staff didn’t feel in a position to resolve or wants DT confirmation on how it resolved comments/suggestions have been flagged accordingly (and are the only comments visible in version 2 of the document). Of course, if there are any items that have not been flagged in version 2 but you believe are of major importance and as such require DT consideration, please share those with the list so these can be added prior to the DT meeting. Best regards, Marika From: Epdp-dt <epdp-dt-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Caitlin Tubergen <caitlin.tubergen@icann.org> Date: Wednesday, July 11, 2018 at 03:57 To: "Austin, Donna via Epdp-dt" <epdp-dt@icann.org> Subject: [Epdp-dt] Documents for EPDP Drafting Call - Wednesday, 11 July 2018 at 12:00 UTC Drafting Team Members: In advance of our call, please find three versions of the draft charter attached: 1. A clean version of the draft charter; 2. A “semi-clean” version of the draft charter, which is a clean version of the charter, but highlights areas of potential disagreement or concern in the comments; 3. A redline version of the draft charter. Please note that the scope section has been removed from all of the attached versions, as that text is still under review by the small EPDP scoping team. Thank you. Kind regards, Caitlin -- Caitlin Tubergen Policy Senior Manager - GNSO ICANN 12025 Waterfront Drive, Suite 300 Los Angeles, CA 90094 Office: +1 310 578 8666 Mobile: +1 310 699 5326 Email: caitlin.tubergen@icann.org