Dear all,
A new version with some cosmetic changes and with a naming to allow an (easier) opening of the doc ;)
All the best
SeB

Skills are useful but diversity is essential.

Sébastien Bachollet
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De : Yrjö Länsipuro <yrjo_lansipuro@hotmail.com>
Date : mercredi 21 septembre 2016 09:22
À : Schweighofer Erich <erich.schweighofer@univie.ac.at>, Sébastien Bachollet <sebastien@bachollet.com>, Olivier Crépin-Leblond <ocl@gih.com>, Wolf Ludwig <wolf.ludwig@comunica-ch.net>, "staff@atlarge.icann.org" <staff@atlarge.icann.org>
Cc : EURALO Task Force on ALS Engagement <euralo-tf-als-engagement@atlarge-lists.icann.org>
Objet : Re: [euralo-tf-als-engagement] Shorter version of the message to ALS's

Dear all,


Merci Sébastien, Danke sehr, Erich! I have incorporated your excellent suggestions in the attached version. 


Best,


Yrjö



From: Schweighofer Erich <erich.schweighofer@univie.ac.at>
Sent: Wednesday, September 21, 2016 5:44 AM
To: Sébastien Bachollet; Yrjö Länsipuro; ocl@gih.com; wolf.ludwig@comunica-ch.net; staff@atlarge.icann.org
Cc: EURALO Task Force on ALS Engagement
Subject: AW: [euralo-tf-als-engagement] Shorter version of the message to ALS's
 

Dear all,

nice, only one thought: after much description, we get quite direct in the last paragraph. Should we write this in a more “Viennese style”, with conjunctive and polite words?

Best, Erich

 

Von: euralo-tf-als-engagement-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org [mailto:euralo-tf-als-engagement-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org] Im Auftrag von Sébastien Bachollet
Gesendet: Dienstag, 20. September 2016 22:51
An: Yrjö Länsipuro; ocl@gih.com; wolf.ludwig@comunica-ch.net; staff@atlarge.icann.org
Cc: EURALO Task Force on ALS Engagement
Betreff: Re: [euralo-tf-als-engagement] Shorter version of the message to ALS's

 

Dear all,

Please find attached the doc with my suggestions.

All the best

SeB

 

Skills are useful but diversity is essential.

 

Sébastien Bachollet

+33 6 07 66 89 33

Blog: http://sebastien.bachollet.fr/

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I would like to underline some of them. First, a point about the way we organized the debate here in Singapore. Stakeholders should have been able to interact on an ...

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De : <euralo-tf-als-engagement-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org> on behalf of Yrjö Länsipuro <yrjo_lansipuro@hotmail.com>
Date : mercredi 14 septembre 2016 14:01
À : Olivier Crépin-Leblond <ocl@gih.com>, Wolf Ludwig <wolf.ludwig@comunica-ch.net>, "staff@atlarge.icann.org" <staff@atlarge.icann.org>
Cc : EURALO Task Force on ALS Engagement <euralo-tf-als-engagement@atlarge-lists.icann.org>
Objet : [euralo-tf-als-engagement] Shorter version of the message to ALS's

 

Dear all,

 

As promised at yesterday's call, attached please find an edited-down version of the message to EURALO ALS's, to be signed be Olivier. I hope the staff can use a suitable mail-merge program to generate individualized messages to each ALS.

 

Best,

 

Yrjö

 

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