EURALO tri-fold brochure
Dear EURALO Members: Those of you at Seoul or who participated in the EURALO teleconference last week will remember a discussion about improving the EURALO flyer and in particular making it a tri-fold leaflet, with more attractive graphics and a new title. I am happy to say that the PDF is attached and personally I think it looks very good. We will assume that this is OK to print if we don't hear anything to the contrary BEFORE 7th November. We would not rush you, but the IGF is coming up, and we need time to print the leaflet and get it to the IGF with our colleagues that are attending. -- Regards, Nick Ashton-Hart Director, At-Large ICANN Office Tel: +33 (450) 40 46 88 Office Fax: +41 (22) 594 8544 Mobile: +41 (79) 595 5468 USA Tel: +1 (202) 657-5460 email: nick.ashton-hart@icann.org Win IM: ashtonhart@hotmail.com / AIM/iSight: nashtonhart@mac.com / Skype: nashtonhart Online Bio: https://www.linkedin.com/in/ashtonhart
Dear Nick, Thanks a lot for this nice piece of work! I think the tri-fold layout works really well, and the text is enjoyably short and snappy. I have a few minor suggestions: Page 1: On the cover, include EURALO under INTERNET CORPORATION FOR ASSIGNED NAMES AND NUMBERS (this would make it easier to identify at first glance what this flyer is about, e.g. when people visit an ICANN booth). Under "At-Large", change "on this website" to "on the website www.atlarge.icann.org" Page 2: Under "Who we are", change "Internet-related civil society and consumer interersts" to "Internet-related civil society and consumer groups" Under "Democratizing ICANN", delete "...and many more" These are my two cents 8-) Heike ----- Original Message ----- From: "Nick Ashton-Hart" <nick.ashton-hart@icann.org> To: <euro-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org> Sent: Wednesday, November 04, 2009 4:57 AM Subject: [EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
Dear EURALO Members:
Those of you at Seoul or who participated in the EURALO teleconference last week will remember a discussion about improving the EURALO flyer and in particular making it a tri-fold leaflet, with more attractive graphics and a new title.
I am happy to say that the PDF is attached and personally I think it looks very good.
We will assume that this is OK to print if we don't hear anything to the contrary BEFORE 7th November. We would not rush you, but the IGF is coming up, and we need time to print the leaflet and get it to the IGF with our colleagues that are attending. -- Regards,
Nick Ashton-Hart Director, At-Large ICANN Office Tel: +33 (450) 40 46 88 Office Fax: +41 (22) 594 8544 Mobile: +41 (79) 595 5468 USA Tel: +1 (202) 657-5460 email: nick.ashton-hart@icann.org Win IM: ashtonhart@hotmail.com / AIM/iSight: nashtonhart@mac.com / Skype: nashtonhart Online Bio: https://www.linkedin.com/in/ashtonhart
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Dear All, Thanks for your comments, Heike. I also think the tri-fold works very well. I agree with your suggested changes and would suggest the following additional changes: Page 1: On the cover, change color of INTERNET CORPORATION FOR ASSIGNED NAMES AND NUMBERS from yellow to white. On the cover, replace the orange color (color of AFRALO) with white. Under "What people say about us": In the quote by Christopher, replace "ALS" with "At-Large Structure". In the quote by Christopher, 5th line, do not hyphenate "participation". In the quote by Olivier, 3rd line, do not hyphenate "constituency". In the quote by Veronica, insert a double quote (") at the beginning of her quote. In the quote by Wolf, 4th line, replace "understood" with "understand". Under section beginning "At-Large": 3rd line - replace "groups" with "At-Large Structures" Page 2: Move heading and text under "Our Hot Issues" to top of next column where these issues are outlined. Under "Your Internet, Your Language", 3rd line, do not hyphenate "EURALO". Under "From IPv4 to IPv6", do not hyphenate "addressing". Let me know what you think! Kind regards, Heidi -----Original Message----- From: euro-discuss-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org [mailto:euro-discuss-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org] On Behalf Of Heike Jensen Sent: Wednesday, November 04, 2009 6:04 AM To: Discussion for At-Large Europe Subject: Re: [EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure Dear Nick, Thanks a lot for this nice piece of work! I think the tri-fold layout works really well, and the text is enjoyably short and snappy. I have a few minor suggestions: Page 1: On the cover, include EURALO under INTERNET CORPORATION FOR ASSIGNED NAMES AND NUMBERS (this would make it easier to identify at first glance what this flyer is about, e.g. when people visit an ICANN booth). Under "At-Large", change "on this website" to "on the website www.atlarge.icann.org" Page 2: Under "Who we are", change "Internet-related civil society and consumer interersts" to "Internet-related civil society and consumer groups" Under "Democratizing ICANN", delete "...and many more" These are my two cents 8-) Heike ----- Original Message ----- From: "Nick Ashton-Hart" <nick.ashton-hart@icann.org> To: <euro-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org> Sent: Wednesday, November 04, 2009 4:57 AM Subject: [EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
Dear EURALO Members:
Those of you at Seoul or who participated in the EURALO teleconference last week will remember a discussion about improving the EURALO flyer and in particular making it a tri-fold leaflet, with more attractive graphics and a new title.
I am happy to say that the PDF is attached and personally I think it looks very good.
We will assume that this is OK to print if we don't hear anything to the contrary BEFORE 7th November. We would not rush you, but the IGF is coming up, and we need time to print the leaflet and get it to the IGF with our colleagues that are attending. -- Regards,
Nick Ashton-Hart Director, At-Large ICANN Office Tel: +33 (450) 40 46 88 Office Fax: +41 (22) 594 8544 Mobile: +41 (79) 595 5468 USA Tel: +1 (202) 657-5460 email: nick.ashton-hart@icann.org Win IM: ashtonhart@hotmail.com / AIM/iSight: nashtonhart@mac.com / Skype: nashtonhart Online Bio: https://www.linkedin.com/in/ashtonhart
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I support both Heike's and Heidi's comments. The brochure looks really good, well done! Dessi
Dear All,
Thanks for your comments, Heike. I also think the tri-fold works very well. I agree with your suggested changes and would suggest the following additional changes:
Page 1:
On the cover, change color of INTERNET CORPORATION FOR ASSIGNED NAMES AND NUMBERS from yellow to white.
On the cover, replace the orange color (color of AFRALO) with white.
Under "What people say about us":
In the quote by Christopher, replace "ALS" with "At-Large Structure".
In the quote by Christopher, 5th line, do not hyphenate "participation".
In the quote by Olivier, 3rd line, do not hyphenate "constituency".
In the quote by Veronica, insert a double quote (") at the beginning of her quote.
In the quote by Wolf, 4th line, replace "understood" with "understand".
Under section beginning "At-Large":
3rd line - replace "groups" with "At-Large Structures"
Page 2: Move heading and text under "Our Hot Issues" to top of next column where these issues are outlined.
Under "Your Internet, Your Language", 3rd line, do not hyphenate "EURALO".
Under "From IPv4 to IPv6", do not hyphenate "addressing".
Let me know what you think!
Kind regards, Heidi
-----Original Message----- From: euro-discuss-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org [mailto:euro-discuss-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org] On Behalf Of Heike Jensen Sent: Wednesday, November 04, 2009 6:04 AM To: Discussion for At-Large Europe Subject: Re: [EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
Dear Nick,
Thanks a lot for this nice piece of work! I think the tri-fold layout works really well, and the text is enjoyably short and snappy.
I have a few minor suggestions:
Page 1:
On the cover, include EURALO under INTERNET CORPORATION FOR ASSIGNED NAMES AND NUMBERS (this would make it easier to identify at first glance what this flyer is about, e.g. when people visit an ICANN booth).
Under "At-Large", change "on this website" to "on the website www.atlarge.icann.org"
Page 2:
Under "Who we are", change "Internet-related civil society and consumer interersts" to "Internet-related civil society and consumer groups"
Under "Democratizing ICANN", delete "...and many more"
These are my two cents 8-) Heike
----- Original Message ----- From: "Nick Ashton-Hart" <nick.ashton-hart@icann.org> To: <euro-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org> Sent: Wednesday, November 04, 2009 4:57 AM Subject: [EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
Dear EURALO Members:
Those of you at Seoul or who participated in the EURALO teleconference last week will remember a discussion about improving the EURALO flyer and in particular making it a tri-fold leaflet, with more attractive graphics and a new title.
I am happy to say that the PDF is attached and personally I think it looks very good.
We will assume that this is OK to print if we don't hear anything to the contrary BEFORE 7th November. We would not rush you, but the IGF is coming up, and we need time to print the leaflet and get it to the IGF with our colleagues that are attending.
Nick Ashton-Hart Director, At-Large ICANN Office Tel: +33 (450) 40 46 88 Office Fax: +41 (22) 594 8544 Mobile: +41 (79) 595 5468 USA Tel: +1 (202) 657-5460 email: nick.ashton-hart@icann.org Win IM: ashtonhart@hotmail.com / AIM/iSight: nashtonhart@mac.com / Skype: nashtonhart Online Bio: https://www.linkedin.com/in/ashtonhart
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Hello Nick, great result! Congratulations to all involved. I support what Heike (and others) said below, although I would humbly disagree on one thing. Heike writes:
Under "Who we are", change "Internet-related civil society and consumer interests" to "Internet-related civil society and consumer groups"
I am unsure which of those two we wish to say - because they have different meanings. If the word "groups" was used, it would effectively bound our reach to civil society and consumer groups. If the word "interests" was used, this could extend to any consumer interests, even those outside the bound of actual consumer groups. Which one do we wish to pursue? Or do we wish to change this sentence altogether to remove the ambiguity? Many thanks, Olivier ----- Original Message ----- From: "Heike Jensen" <dr.heike.jensen@web.de> To: "Discussion for At-Large Europe" <euro-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org> Sent: Wednesday, November 04, 2009 3:04 PM Subject: Re: [EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
Dear Nick,
Thanks a lot for this nice piece of work! I think the tri-fold layout works really well, and the text is enjoyably short and snappy.
I have a few minor suggestions:
Page 1:
On the cover, include EURALO under INTERNET CORPORATION FOR ASSIGNED NAMES AND NUMBERS (this would make it easier to identify at first glance what this flyer is about, e.g. when people visit an ICANN booth).
Under "At-Large", change "on this website" to "on the website www.atlarge.icann.org"
Page 2:
Under "Who we are", change "Internet-related civil society and consumer interersts" to "Internet-related civil society and consumer groups"
Under "Democratizing ICANN", delete "...and many more"
These are my two cents 8-) Heike
----- Original Message ----- From: "Nick Ashton-Hart" <nick.ashton-hart@icann.org> To: <euro-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org> Sent: Wednesday, November 04, 2009 4:57 AM Subject: [EURO-Discuss] EURALO tri-fold brochure
Dear EURALO Members:
Those of you at Seoul or who participated in the EURALO teleconference last week will remember a discussion about improving the EURALO flyer and in particular making it a tri-fold leaflet, with more attractive graphics and a new title.
I am happy to say that the PDF is attached and personally I think it looks very good.
We will assume that this is OK to print if we don't hear anything to the contrary BEFORE 7th November. We would not rush you, but the IGF is coming up, and we need time to print the leaflet and get it to the IGF with our colleagues that are attending. -- Regards,
Nick Ashton-Hart Director, At-Large ICANN Office Tel: +33 (450) 40 46 88 Office Fax: +41 (22) 594 8544 Mobile: +41 (79) 595 5468 USA Tel: +1 (202) 657-5460 email: nick.ashton-hart@icann.org Win IM: ashtonhart@hotmail.com / AIM/iSight: nashtonhart@mac.com / Skype: nashtonhart Online Bio: https://www.linkedin.com/in/ashtonhart
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participants (5)
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Dragoslava Greve -
Heidi Ullrich -
Heike Jensen -
Nick Ashton-Hart -
Olivier MJ Crepin-Leblond