i’ve attached draft Charter v.5 — which folds in the comments i saw on the list.  

i’ve chosen to include the email-thread about Mark’s suggestions because that was a pretty substantial conversation and i thought you might find it helpful to have it for reference.

do note that i ever so slightly modified Mark’s suggestion.  partly by where i placed it in the existing language, partly in breaking it into two paragraphs, and partly by changing the first sentence.  *I* don’t think i’ve done any damage with my changes, but you should all look closely to see if you agree.  :-)

mikey