Hi Amy,

A couple more comments on the revised draft:

- 3.2.1: It’s unclear if the two business day deadline for a response applies to “High Priority Requests”. 4.1.2 still says 24 hours for High Priority Requests to be “actioned”. We should revise 4.1.2 to change the 24 hour period to two business days or revise 3.2.1 to say “Except as provided in 4.1.2, within two business days…”

- 4.2.2.3: Change “circumstances showing that disclosure will endanger safety” to “circumstances showing that disclosure may endanger safety”

Thanks,

Greg

From: gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl-bounces@icann.org [mailto:gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Amy Bivins
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Subject: [Gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl] Please Review: PP IRT draft v1 redline of PSWG proposal attached

Dear Colleagues,

Thanks so much for your active participation on yesterday’s call. Pursuant to the IRT’s discussion yesterday on the PSWG proposal, I’m attaching a first draft of a markup of the PSWG proposal for your review. Please review and provide any additional suggested edits or comments that you would like to discuss on next week’s call no later than your EOD Monday (but earlier is better!).

I’m also attaching a summary of all of your comments from yesterday’s discussion, as well as a document detailing all of your prior input on this proposal.

The goal is to finalize this discussion draft shortly after next week’s call (20 June) so that it can be distributed to the PSWG in preparation for the IRT/PSWG meeting at ICANN59.

For those who could not attend, I encourage you to listen to the call recording (available on the wiki, https://participate.icann.org/p1zlpvjfw5i/). Unfortunately, there is a problem with the last 10-12 minutes of the recording, with the host and participant audio not recording in sync, but you can still hear most of what was said during the meeting.

Best,

Amy

Amy E. Bivins

Registrar Services and Engagement Senior Manager

Registrar Services and Industry Relations

Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)

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