That's a good suggestion Michele. Glancing over all the documents, minus the data retention spec it is still a hefty read.

Personally I put everything into "user stories", so I get a complete overview of all actors involved on an operational level. Which is a ton of work of at least two weeks. But it will reveal drafting issues real fast.

Theo


On 25-10-2017 14:38, Michele Neylon - Blacknight wrote:

And to clarify.

I think a December 1 deadline might be work workable, though I’ve no idea what others feels.

 

Regards

 

Michele

 

 

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From: <gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Michele Neylon <michele@blacknight.com>
Reply-To: "gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl@icann.org" <gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl@icann.org>
Date: Wednesday 25 October 2017 at 12:42
To: "gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl@icann.org" <gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl@icann.org>
Subject: Re: [Gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl] Materials, action items from 17 Oct Privacy/Proxy IRT call

 

Caitlin

 

While we’ve made quite a bit of progress on this over the last while a full review will take time and in our case at least I will need to get several other members of our team to look at everything. Add to that other obligations, plus the week+ long ICANN meeting I don’t think the November 14th deadline is workable

 

Regards

 

Michele

 

 

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Blacknight Solutions

Hosting, Colocation & Domains

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http://blacknight.blog/

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Some thoughts: https://ceo.hosting/

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From: <gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Caitlin Tubergen <caitlin.tubergen@icann.org>
Reply-To: "gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl@icann.org" <gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl@icann.org>
Date: Wednesday 25 October 2017 at 01:44
To: "gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl@icann.org" <gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl@icann.org>
Subject: [Gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl] Materials, action items from 17 Oct Privacy/Proxy IRT call

 

Dear Colleagues,

 

Thanks so much for your participation on today’s Privacy/Proxy IRT call. For those who could not attend, I encourage you to review the recording and materials on the wiki, https://community.icann.org/display/IRT/24+October+2017.

 

During the call, we discussed an overview of the changes to the draft PPAA. 

 

Please note that ICANN proposed a deadline of Tuesday, 14 November for all comments, concerns, and edits to the draft PPAA. The changes from the last iteration, provided to the IRT in July, have been highlighted in the attached issues list.  Please respond to the list if you would like to request a longer review period.

 

During ICANN60, we will be presenting an overview of the P/P program’s status to the community.  Attached, please find the slide deck for the presentation.

 

To highlight a few notes from the IRT’s discussion this morning, we received feedback to:

 

  1. Edit the definition of Working Group in Section 1.43, to specify that the Provider Stakeholder Group, if formed, shall only appoint the provider representatives of the Working Group, and the GNSO may appoint other members of the community.

 

  1. Add back in the previously-deleted Code of Conduct language in Section 3.5.1.

 

 

  1. Add back in the previously-deleted review provision in Section 7 of the Customer Data Accuracy Program Specification.

 

If you believe the above items do not reflect the intent of the Working Group’s recommendations, please reply to the list by 14 November 2017.

 

Thank you, and safe travels to those of you attending ICANN 60!

 

Kind regards,

 

Caitlin Tubergen

Registrar Services and Engagement Senior Manager

ICANN

12025 Waterfront Drive, Suite 300

Los Angeles, CA 90094

Office: +1 310 578 8666

Mobile: +1 310 699 5326

Email: caitlin.tubergen@icann.org

 

 



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