Hello, All, Thanks so much for your active participation on the Privacy/Proxy IRT call today-we had a very productive meeting. I'm attaching an updated version of Section 2 of the draft Policy document, which reflects our discussion on the call today. To summarize, instances of "SHOULD" in the document have been changed to "SHALL" pursuant to discussion on the call about what the PDP WG intended-that these would be requirements, not best practices. Nearly everyone who participated in the "green check/red x" ask seemed to agree with this, with the exception of Volker. Volker, if you would like to share any additional thoughts or reasoning surrounding the WG's intent here and if anyone else feels strongly about this, please comment on the list. We want a full record and to ensure that we have interpreted the WG's intent accurately, so we encourage everyone to please speak up (on this and always!). I've also made some updates to the "data reminders" and "terms of service" section. And we will pick up on the ToS section next week. Materials from the call will be posted on the wiki shortly. If anyone has questions or comments in the interim please reply to the list, and I will share any new materials with you as they are available. Best, Amy Amy E. Bivins Registrar Policy Services Manager Registrar Services and Industry Relations Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Direct: +1 (202) 249-7551 Fax: +1 (202) 789-0104 Email: amy.bivins@icann.org www.icann.org