Dear Chris, Rudi,
I am re-reading Final Report T&T.docx and while in my opinion, everything is substantially in order, there are some formatting issues and spelling errors for your attention:
1. Table of Contents - section 6. Community Input has renumbered itself to 1. and so forth.
2. Chapter 1.1 Background - the open inverted comma that appears towards the end of the 4th line is missing is close counterpart. This perhaps should appear at the end of Chapter 1.1, ie. end of the 2nd bullet?
3. Chapter 1.3 Recommendation #3 on pg 4 - is reference to 'ccTLD' meant to be included considering that our mission and scope only pertains to contact information with respect to gTLDs? Where else is 'ccTLD' mentioned except as a supporting example on pg 16? I thought our debate centered purely on gLTDs.
4. Chapter 1.3 Recommendation #4 on pg 4 - 'policies' on the 4th line is mis-spelt. Also the 2nd sentence on the 4th line seems to be 'hanging', perhaps prefix it with "It is also assured that ....."?
5. Chapter 1.3 Recommendation #6 on pg 4 - the part of the sentence beginning on the 3rd line reads funny. May I suggest it be reworded to read as "... and its linguistic/script capacity expanded for receiving, ......"?
6. Chapter 1.3 Last paragraph on pg 4 - should be '... the question of who should decide who should bear ....' i.e the words 'of who' have been omitted.
7. Chapter 1.4 - I know that the Working Group has been abbreviated to (WG) in para 1.2 but I think no where else is the abbreviation of WG used in this document except for in chapter 1.4 - so can I please be pedantic and ask that the 2 references to 'WG' - one in each paragraph - be amended to 'Working Group'?
8. Chapter 3 - suffers the same issue as in Chapter 1.1 i.e. missing closing inverted comma in 1st para.
9. Chapter 4 on pg 9 2nd para - to remove the word 'some' on the 4th line.
10. End of Chapter 5.1.2 on pg 17 - perhaps add the words 'although the Working Group did not come to a conclusion as to who should decide who should bear the said burden.' to properly address our non-answering of Charter Q2.
11. Chapter 5.1.3 on pg 17 - the word 'borne' is mis-spelt; appears twice in the 2nd paragraph.
12. Chapter 5.2.1 on pg 18 para 1 - 'losslessly'? You mean 'loosely'?
13. Chapter 5.2.2 Recommendation #3 on pg 19 - see point 3 above, take out reference to 'ccTLD'?
14. Chapter 5.2.2 Recommendation #4 on pg 19 - see point 4 above, 'policies' is mis-spelt.
15. Chapter 5.2.2 Recommendation $6 on top of pg 20 - see point 5 above.
16. End of Chapter 5.2.2 re Charter Q2 - see point 6 above.
I take it that the rest of the document contains text copied from a reliable source. Also that Annex B is the same copy that was finalised before.