Thanks Steve.

Mark, all, I included 2 language-related edits and 1 additional element to question 4 which is related to what I brought up at our call.

Other than those, I'm good with the copy.

Kind regards,
Justine



On Fri, 8 Apr 2022 at 04:34, Mark Datysgeld <mark@governanceprimer.com> wrote:

Steve,

In my view, this revision addresses all concerns raised during the call.

Best,

On 04/07/2022 16:49, Steve Chan wrote:

Dear All,

 

Staff attempted to revise the inquiry to Contractual Compliance based on the previous discussion. You can see the suggested changes in the Google doc here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KOaF0cc-hpGeQc3rrbe16jRjGew2FuiG/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=101396189572924281654&rtpof=true&sd=true

 

As was agreed on the call, please raise any suggestions or concerns you might have no later than 23:59 UTC on Friday, 8 April 2022. If any suggested changes are substantive, I would suggest they be raised on list. If there are minor edits, please go ahead and just suggest in the Google doc directly.

 

Best,

Steve

 

 

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