Dear All,

Please find the redlined draft text that was revised as a result of the review of ICANN org’s substantive input. The redlines incorporated input from the EPDP Team during last week’s meeting.

Topic A: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bt0LT45UaLynFNverh1nJhyvq6q6NxgSFAOnOp2LG44/edit

• A5, Rec 1.5 and IG 1.6, pp.6-8
• A9, IG 1.15, pp.15-16

Topic B: https://docs.google.com/document/d/15YGISgNQYL_VfcVVZ6E97qbo42GPziP6x089bR3wgZw/edit

• B2, Rec 2.2, p.2
• B5, Rec 2.8, pp.5-6

Topic D: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C6xKX87w2LtN4Is0mehuRgc1GqjKmbbhT14KbvUH5Sw/edit?pli=1

• D1a, Rec 2.4, IG 2.15, Rec 2.22, IG 2.23, pp.1-3
• D1b, Rec 2.6, IG 2.19, IG 2.20, IG 2.21, pp.4-6
  • Note: Discussion of IG 2.xx is tabled, pending ALAC team’s input
• D8, Rec 2.16, Rec 2.17, Rec 2.18, pp.13-14
  • Note: The term “un-delegation” may be changed, pending ICANN org’s input

As a reminder, the draft text circulated last week includes the following:

• E3 (String Similarity Review): https://docs.google.com/document/d/115eSNnxBsCbUszEGU7i4xbzLwu1u8_UdaGEJD9CVvVc/edit?usp=sharing
• E3a, E4, E2, B4a, E1, B5, E7, and A8: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iXaAy3uDyoVlZ4L9jYiY_8bzqpZR7I1xa9qUWenB5XU/edit

Please be so kind to complete your review of all these batches of draft text before ICANN76. The second reading and discussion of your input (if any) is expected to take place during ICANN76 EPDP-IDNs working sessions on Saturday, 11 March.

Thank you for your review!

Best Regards,

Ariel, Steve, Emily