Dear All,

This is a reminder to kindly provide your input for the new draft text highlighted below by EOB tomorrow (Thursday, 2 February).

Thank you for your review!

Ariel

From: Ariel Liang <ariel.liang@icann.org>
Date: Thursday, January 19, 2023 at 12:17 PM
To: "gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org" <gnso-epdp-idn-team@icann.org>
Subject: Draft Output: Charter Questions A7, B4, D1b, E5, E6

Dear All

As mentioned by Donna during today’s call, please find the new batch of draft output text in response to the following charter questions. The draft text is included in the google docs as redlines.

• A7, Rec 1.14, pp.13-15: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bt0LT45UaLynFNverh1nJhyvq6q6NxgSFAOnOp2LG44/edit
• B4, Recs 2.11-2.14, pp.3-5: https://docs.google.com/document/d/15YGISgNQYL_VfcVVZ6E97qbo42GPziP6x089bR3wgZw/edit
• D1b, Recs 2.9-10, pp.2-3, 5-6: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C6xKX87w2LtN4Is0mehuRgc1GqjKmbbhT14KbvUH5Sw/edit
  • Note: the redlines on Recs 2.6 and Rec 2.xx require additional discussion by the EPDP Team in conjunction with the review of ICANN org input. Only the new recs 2.9-10 and their rationale are requested to be reviewed this round.
• E5, Recs 3.10-3.11, pp.3-6: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RLvsyQvliafNEA9Ja1RCObywpAWfp1kTmte0WZlyqqs/edit
• E6, p.6: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RLvsyQvliafNEA9Ja1RCObywpAWfp1kTmte0WZlyqqs/edit

All of these documents are also posted on the wiki page here: https://community.icann.org/x/XwyHCg.

Following the agreed format, the draft output language includes the following components:

• Brief answer to the charter question
• Recommendations and implementation guidance  
• Rationale for recommendations and implementation guidance 

Please provide any input/suggestion for the draft outcome language on the mailing list by EOB Thursday, 2 February.

Thank you for your review!

Best Regards,

Ariel, Steve, Emily