Dear EPDP Team,

For those providing input on the zero draft (see https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TKw8tOe0qgkXgBNLjVxb7l7tu20UF9t-/edit), can we please encourage you to do this in the form of comments and not edits. Even if you are proposing specific wording changes, please note these in the form of comments as it will otherwise be very difficult to review and reconcile the input received.

Thanks,

Caitlin, Berry and Marika