Happy New
Year everyone – here is a quick reminder of the upcoming
deadline of 7 January 2020 to provide your group’s input on
the latest version of the draft Initial Report (see
instructions below).
Best
regards,
Caitlin,
Berry and Marika
Ho, ho, ho,
EPDP Team,
As promised,
your early Christmas present has arrived! The latest version
of the draft Initial Report has been posted for your review
(see
https://community.icann.org/x/BQZxBw).
In this clean version, staff has incorporated the latest
language of the building blocks that has been reviewed over
the last couple of weeks and made a number of minor updates
to address input already received. Remaining comments and
text highlighted in yellow concern items that will need to
be further reviewed and discussed by the EPDP Team in
upcoming meetings.
For those
interested, we have also posted a redline version (pdf
document) so you can see all the edits made as well as
comments resolved. If there are any comments or edits that
have been applied / resolved but which in your group’s
opinion should be further considered, please mark these as
such in the new google doc.
As a
reminder:
- Please do not
reopen previously closed discussions unless there is new
information to consider.
- If you have
concerns about certain section, please provide alternative
language to address your concern but also factor in other
perspectives expressed to date.
- Please do not
redline but provide language suggestions in the form of
comments so that these can be reviewed by all before being
applied.
- Minor edits
(grammar, style) can be sent to the staff support team
directly.
Your group’s
input is due at the latest
by 7 January 2020.
Happy
reading and happy holidays!!
Caitlin,
Berry and Marika