I think these are good edits.  One small point in the last part dealing with non-binding arbitration....I would suggest that you should say "the registrar's interpretation of the law takes precedence", as each side will inevitably have its own interpretation of the law, but only one side is going to get the fine....

Stephanie Perrin

ePDP Team –

 

In preparation for tomorrow’s call, please find attached a redline PDF of our edits to Section 4.4 of the Temp Spec, along with a slide/PDF with “clean” language for Kurt & Staff. Matt, Theo and I will walk through these edits, along with our rationale.

 

Look forward to our discussion tomorrow.

 

Thanks—

J.

 

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James Bladel

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