Re: [Gnso-epdp-team] For Final Review - Initial Report - deadline Wednesday 21 November at 18.00 UTC
Hi All- One change needed to Rec 8: Please insert a footnote that reads: “The IPC and BC representatives on the EPDP are of the view that there should be no redactions of any data elements for legal entities.” Margie From: Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org> Date: Tuesday, November 20, 2018 at 11:47 AM To: "Gnso-epdp-team@icann.org" <Gnso-epdp-team@icann.org> Subject: [Gnso-epdp-team] For Final Review - Initial Report - deadline Wednesday 21 November at 18.00 UTC Dear EPDP Team, We are pleased to share the proposed Initial Report for publication. Thank you again for attending and constructively contributing to the many hours of meetings over the past few days. * Redline – https://drive.google.com/a/icann.org/file/d/171jOv42nahKFnPW1WhSE8ckr6K00i4RX/view?usp=sharing<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__drive.google.com_a_icann.org_file_d_171jOv42nahKFnPW1WhSE8ckr6K00i4RX_view-3Fusp-3Dsharing&d=DwMGaQ&c=5VD0RTtNlTh3ycd41b3MUw&r=_4XWSt8rUHZPiRG6CoP4Fnk_CCk4p550lffeMi3E1z8&m=ZiwxKVKa8hHlUAYgJfavieCxrWhljm8SnKZNQUzOI5E&s=f7Hfk8pnOyrShrKAqIaCKRGlZarBJNdwbgiMD6NzVUg&e=> * Clean – https://drive.google.com/a/icann.org/file/d/1OyG6ExIGkemW902jHYF7V88Y8mu-kObk/view?usp=sharing<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__drive.google.com_a_icann.org_file_d_1OyG6ExIGkemW902jHYF7V88Y8mu-2DkObk_view-3Fusp-3Dsharing&d=DwMGaQ&c=5VD0RTtNlTh3ycd41b3MUw&r=_4XWSt8rUHZPiRG6CoP4Fnk_CCk4p550lffeMi3E1z8&m=ZiwxKVKa8hHlUAYgJfavieCxrWhljm8SnKZNQUzOI5E&s=uNBGVUoecfvVAP5VvpqXm2fmy4PnKpep_ZX4LlxuMgg&e=> Note that in the redline version, you will find highlighted in yellow the updates proposed by Thomas for the responsibilities section. He also spotted some inconsistencies in the related tables that have been updated accordingly (as well as the related data elements workbooks sections). Please also note that per Monday’s discussion, the summary has been split out into an Executive Summary and Overview of Preliminary Recommendations. For your convenience, you will also find attached the clean Word version. However, should you spot any minor issues or show stoppers, please use the line number reference in the pdf version to facilitate locating the language. Minor issues (e.g. grammatical, readability) can be sent to staff off list. Due to internal ICANN processing times and deadlines we require feedback by 1800 UTC, tomorrow, 21 November. If you need additional time (not more than two hours), you must notify us before the 1800 cut off. Best regards, Caitlin, Berry and Marika Marika Konings Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Email: marika.konings@icann.org<mailto:marika.konings@icann.org> Follow the GNSO via Twitter @ICANN_GNSO Find out more about the GNSO by taking our interactive courses<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__learn.icann.org_courses_...> and visiting the GNSO Newcomer pages<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__gnso.icann.org_sites_gns...>.
Dear Marika Tks Would we look at this initial report tomorrow? Regards Kavouss Sent from my iPhone
On 21 Nov 2018, at 18:38, Margie Milam <margiemilam@fb.com> wrote:
Hi All- One change needed to Rec 8: Please insert a footnote that reads: “The IPC and BC representatives on the EPDP are of the view that there should be no redactions of any data elements for legal entities.”
Margie
From: Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org> Date: Tuesday, November 20, 2018 at 11:47 AM To: "Gnso-epdp-team@icann.org" <Gnso-epdp-team@icann.org> Subject: [Gnso-epdp-team] For Final Review - Initial Report - deadline Wednesday 21 November at 18.00 UTC
Dear EPDP Team,
We are pleased to share the proposed Initial Report for publication. Thank you again for attending and constructively contributing to the many hours of meetings over the past few days.
Redline – https://drive.google.com/a/icann.org/file/d/171jOv42nahKFnPW1WhSE8ckr6K00i4R... Clean – https://drive.google.com/a/icann.org/file/d/1OyG6ExIGkemW902jHYF7V88Y8mu-kOb...
Note that in the redline version, you will find highlighted in yellow the updates proposed by Thomas for the responsibilities section. He also spotted some inconsistencies in the related tables that have been updated accordingly (as well as the related data elements workbooks sections). Please also note that per Monday’s discussion, the summary has been split out into an Executive Summary and Overview of Preliminary Recommendations.
For your convenience, you will also find attached the clean Word version. However, should you spot any minor issues or show stoppers, please use the line number reference in the pdf version to facilitate locating the language. Minor issues (e.g. grammatical, readability) can be sent to staff off list.
Due to internal ICANN processing times and deadlines we require feedback by 1800 UTC, tomorrow, 21 November. If you need additional time (not more than two hours), you must notify us before the 1800 cut off.
Best regards,
Caitlin, Berry and Marika
Marika Konings Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Email: marika.konings@icann.org
Follow the GNSO via Twitter @ICANN_GNSO Find out more about the GNSO by taking our interactive courses and visiting the GNSO Newcomer pages.
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Dear Kavouss, Please note that there is no meeting scheduled for tomorrow. As no major issues were identified, the Initial Report is expected to be published for public comment later today. The next EPDP Team meeting is scheduled for Tuesday 27 November at 14.00 UTC. Best regards, Caitlin, Berry and Marika On 21 Nov 2018, at 14:51, Arasteh <kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com<mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com>> wrote: Dear Marika Tks Would we look at this initial report tomorrow? Regards Kavouss Sent from my iPhone On 21 Nov 2018, at 18:38, Margie Milam <margiemilam@fb.com<mailto:margiemilam@fb.com>> wrote: Hi All- One change needed to Rec 8: Please insert a footnote that reads: “The IPC and BC representatives on the EPDP are of the view that there should be no redactions of any data elements for legal entities.” Margie From: Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team-bounces@icann.org<mailto:gnso-epdp-team-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org<mailto:marika.konings@icann.org>> Date: Tuesday, November 20, 2018 at 11:47 AM To: "Gnso-epdp-team@icann.org<mailto:Gnso-epdp-team@icann.org>" <Gnso-epdp-team@icann.org<mailto:Gnso-epdp-team@icann.org>> Subject: [Gnso-epdp-team] For Final Review - Initial Report - deadline Wednesday 21 November at 18.00 UTC Dear EPDP Team, We are pleased to share the proposed Initial Report for publication. Thank you again for attending and constructively contributing to the many hours of meetings over the past few days. * Redline – https://drive.google.com/a/icann.org/file/d/171jOv42nahKFnPW1WhSE8ckr6K00i4RX/view?usp=sharing<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__drive.google.com_a_icann.org_file_d_171jOv42nahKFnPW1WhSE8ckr6K00i4RX_view-3Fusp-3Dsharing&d=DwMGaQ&c=5VD0RTtNlTh3ycd41b3MUw&r=_4XWSt8rUHZPiRG6CoP4Fnk_CCk4p550lffeMi3E1z8&m=ZiwxKVKa8hHlUAYgJfavieCxrWhljm8SnKZNQUzOI5E&s=f7Hfk8pnOyrShrKAqIaCKRGlZarBJNdwbgiMD6NzVUg&e=> * Clean – https://drive.google.com/a/icann.org/file/d/1OyG6ExIGkemW902jHYF7V88Y8mu-kObk/view?usp=sharing<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__drive.google.com_a_icann.org_file_d_1OyG6ExIGkemW902jHYF7V88Y8mu-2DkObk_view-3Fusp-3Dsharing&d=DwMGaQ&c=5VD0RTtNlTh3ycd41b3MUw&r=_4XWSt8rUHZPiRG6CoP4Fnk_CCk4p550lffeMi3E1z8&m=ZiwxKVKa8hHlUAYgJfavieCxrWhljm8SnKZNQUzOI5E&s=uNBGVUoecfvVAP5VvpqXm2fmy4PnKpep_ZX4LlxuMgg&e=> Note that in the redline version, you will find highlighted in yellow the updates proposed by Thomas for the responsibilities section. He also spotted some inconsistencies in the related tables that have been updated accordingly (as well as the related data elements workbooks sections). Please also note that per Monday’s discussion, the summary has been split out into an Executive Summary and Overview of Preliminary Recommendations. For your convenience, you will also find attached the clean Word version. However, should you spot any minor issues or show stoppers, please use the line number reference in the pdf version to facilitate locating the language. Minor issues (e.g. grammatical, readability) can be sent to staff off list. Due to internal ICANN processing times and deadlines we require feedback by 1800 UTC, tomorrow, 21 November. If you need additional time (not more than two hours), you must notify us before the 1800 cut off. Best regards, Caitlin, Berry and Marika Marika Konings Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Email: marika.konings@icann.org<mailto:marika.konings@icann.org> Follow the GNSO via Twitter @ICANN_GNSO Find out more about the GNSO by taking our interactive courses<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__learn.icann.org_courses_...> and visiting the GNSO Newcomer pages<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__gnso.icann.org_sites_gns...>. _______________________________________________ Gnso-epdp-team mailing list Gnso-epdp-team@icann.org<mailto:Gnso-epdp-team@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-epdp-team
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