Re: [Gnso-epdp-team] Fwd: Updated EPDP Phase 2 Final Report
Rafik and Staff, May I suggest that this be re-issued with SOME indication at least on the cover page that this is an updated version. Otherwise there is no way a casual reader will know which version they have. Adding "Updated 25 August 2020" will do if you don't want to change the overall date of 31 July. Alan At 2020-08-25 07:36 PM, Rafik Dammak wrote:
Dear EPDP team members,
please find attached the revised final report and message sent to GNSO council.
Best,
Rafik
---------- Forwarded message --------- De : Rafik Dammak <<mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com>rafik.dammak@gmail.com> Date: mer. 26 août 2020 à 08:31 Subject: Updated EPDP Phase 2 Final Report To: Council GNSO <<mailto:council@gnso.icann.org>council@gnso.icann.org>
Hi all,
Please find attached the updated EPDP Team Final Report which now also includes the minority statements from the GAC and the SSAC. In addition, the ALAC provided an addendum to their minority statement. The Staff Support Team also took advantage to fix some formatting and make some minor corrections, most notably, paragraphs 4.4 and 4.5 in recommendation #4 turned out to be duplicates. Please delete the previous version and use this one for your and your groupâs review.
Best Regards,
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I agree with Alan’s sensible suggestion. Kind regards, Laureen Kapin Counsel for International Consumer Protection Federal Trade Commission (202) 326-3237 From: Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team-bounces@icann.org> On Behalf Of Alan Greenberg Sent: Tuesday, August 25, 2020 10:09 PM To: Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak@gmail.com>; gnso-epdp-team@icann.org Subject: Re: [Gnso-epdp-team] Fwd: Updated EPDP Phase 2 Final Report Rafik and Staff, May I suggest that this be re-issued with SOME indication at least on the cover page that this is an updated version. Otherwise there is no way a casual reader will know which version they have. Adding "Updated 25 August 2020" will do if you don't want to change the overall date of 31 July. Alan At 2020-08-25 07:36 PM, Rafik Dammak wrote: Dear EPDP team members, please find attached the revised final report and message sent to GNSO council. Best, Rafik ---------- Forwarded message --------- De : Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak@gmail.com<mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com> > Date: mer. 26 août 2020 à 08:31 Subject: Updated EPDP Phase 2 Final Report To: Council GNSO <council@gnso.icann.org<mailto:council@gnso.icann.org> > Hi all, Please find attached the updated EPDP Team Final Report which now also includes the minority statements from the GAC and the SSAC. In addition, the ALAC provided an addendum to their minority statement. The Staff Support Team also took advantage to fix some formatting and make some minor corrections, most notably, paragraphs 4.4 and 4.5 in recommendation #4 turned out to be duplicates. Please delete the previous version and use this one for your and your group’s review. Best Regards, Rafik Content-Type: application/pdf; name="EPDP Phase 2 Final Report - Updated FINAL - 31 July 2020.pdf" Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="EPDP Phase 2 Final Report - Updated FINAL - 31 July 2020.pdf" Content-ID: <17427f4144ad558ba11> X-Attachment-Id: 17427f4144ad558ba11 _______________________________________________ Gnso-epdp-team mailing list Gnso-epdp-team@icann.org https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-epdp-team _______________________________________________ By submitting your personal data, you consent to the processing of your personal data for purposes of subscribing to this mailing list accordance with the ICANN Privacy Policy ( https://www.icann.org/privacy/policy) and the website Terms of Service ( https://www.icann.org/privacy/tos). You can visit the Mailman link above to change your membership status or configuration, including unsubscribing, setting digest-style delivery or disabling delivery altogether (e.g., for a vacation), and so on.
So do I. Version recording is really important. Stephanie Perrin On 2020-08-26 8:18 a.m., Kapin, Laureen via Gnso-epdp-team wrote:
I agree with Alan’s sensible suggestion.
Kind regards,
Laureen Kapin
Counsel for International Consumer Protection
Federal Trade Commission
(202) 326-3237
*From:*Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team-bounces@icann.org> *On Behalf Of *Alan Greenberg *Sent:* Tuesday, August 25, 2020 10:09 PM *To:* Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak@gmail.com>; gnso-epdp-team@icann.org *Subject:* Re: [Gnso-epdp-team] Fwd: Updated EPDP Phase 2 Final Report
Rafik and Staff,
May I suggest that this be re-issued with SOME indication at least on the cover page that this is an updated version. Otherwise there is no way a casual reader will know which version they have. Adding "Updated 25 August 2020" will do if you don't want to change the overall date of 31 July.
Alan
At 2020-08-25 07:36 PM, Rafik Dammak wrote:
Dear EPDP team members,
please find attached the revised final report and message sent to GNSO council.
Best,
Rafik
---------- Forwarded message --------- De : *Rafik Dammak* <rafik.dammak@gmail.com <mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com> > Date: mer. 26 août 2020 à 08:31 Subject: Updated EPDP Phase 2 Final Report To: Council GNSO <council@gnso.icann.org <mailto:council@gnso.icann.org> >
Hi all,
Please find attached the updated EPDP Team Final Report which now also includes the minority statements from the GAC and the SSAC. In addition, the ALAC provided an addendum to their minority statement. The Staff Support Team also took advantage to fix some formatting and make some minor corrections, most notably, paragraphs 4.4 and 4.5 in recommendation #4 turned out to be duplicates. Please delete the previous version and use this one for your and your group’s review.
Best Regards,
Rafik Content-Type: application/pdf; name="EPDP Phase 2 Final Report - Updated FINAL - 31 July 2020.pdf" Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="EPDP Phase 2 Final Report - Updated FINAL - 31 July 2020.pdf" Content-ID: <17427f4144ad558ba11> X-Attachment-Id: 17427f4144ad558ba11
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Alan Greenberg
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Kapin, Laureen
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Stephanie E Perrin