For your review - final version of section 3 of the Final Report
Dear EPDP Team, Please find attached for your review a clean and line-numbered version of section 3 of the Final Report. Please review this document and flag any “cannot live with” items of your group by Wednesday 24 August COB here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1knSKHXt0njWqXMmpiDKA76amycenNBUl/edit. Any minor edits (or those not rising to the level of “cannot live with” items) should be added to the second table. As discussed during the call, this version includes at lines 232-241 proposed compromise language that aims to bring together the three different proposals that were put forward in relation to the guidance recommendation. If the proponents of these different proposals have concerns about this compromise language, they are encouraged to work together to put forward proposed edits that can be reviewed by the group. Similarly, some minor edits have been made to recommendation #1 (which was previously known as recommendation #3) that were shared with the small team for its consideration. In addition, other minor updates have been made for consistency and clean up (to reflect the transition to a Final Report). For those interested in seeing the redline version, please let us know off-list and we can send you a copy of the redline version. Best regards, Caitlin, Berry and Marika
Do you mean Tuesday, 24 Aug, or Wednesday, 25 Aug? Steve On Tue, Aug 24, 2021 at 4:13 PM Marika Konings via Gnso-epdp-team < gnso-epdp-team@icann.org> wrote:
Dear EPDP Team,
Please find attached for your review a clean and line-numbered version of section 3 of the Final Report. Please review this document and flag any “cannot live with” items of your group *by Wednesday 24 August COB* here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1knSKHXt0njWqXMmpiDKA76amycenNBUl/edit. Any minor edits (or those not rising to the level of “cannot live with” items) should be added to the second table.
As discussed during the call, this version includes at lines 232-241 proposed compromise language that aims to bring together the three different proposals that were put forward in relation to the guidance recommendation. If the proponents of these different proposals have concerns about this compromise language, they are encouraged to work together to put forward proposed edits that can be reviewed by the group. Similarly, some minor edits have been made to recommendation #1 (which was previously known as recommendation #3) that were shared with the small team for its consideration.
In addition, other minor updates have been made for consistency and clean up (to reflect the transition to a Final Report). For those interested in seeing the redline version, please let us know off-list and we can send you a copy of the redline version.
Best regards,
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Apologies that should be Wednesday 25 August. Thanks for flagging. From: Steve Crocker <steve@shinkuro.com> Date: Tuesday, 24 August 2021 at 22:17 To: Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org> Cc: "gnso-epdp-team@icann.org" <gnso-epdp-team@icann.org> Subject: [Ext] Re: [Gnso-epdp-team] For your review - final version of section 3 of the Final Report Do you mean Tuesday, 24 Aug, or Wednesday, 25 Aug? Steve On Tue, Aug 24, 2021 at 4:13 PM Marika Konings via Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team@icann.org<mailto:gnso-epdp-team@icann.org>> wrote: Dear EPDP Team, Please find attached for your review a clean and line-numbered version of section 3 of the Final Report. Please review this document and flag any “cannot live with” items of your group by Wednesday 24 August COB here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1knSKHXt0njWqXMmpiDKA76amycenNBUl/edit [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1knSKHXt0njWqX...>. Any minor edits (or those not rising to the level of “cannot live with” items) should be added to the second table. As discussed during the call, this version includes at lines 232-241 proposed compromise language that aims to bring together the three different proposals that were put forward in relation to the guidance recommendation. If the proponents of these different proposals have concerns about this compromise language, they are encouraged to work together to put forward proposed edits that can be reviewed by the group. Similarly, some minor edits have been made to recommendation #1 (which was previously known as recommendation #3) that were shared with the small team for its consideration. In addition, other minor updates have been made for consistency and clean up (to reflect the transition to a Final Report). For those interested in seeing the redline version, please let us know off-list and we can send you a copy of the redline version. Best regards, Caitlin, Berry and Marika _______________________________________________ Gnso-epdp-team mailing list Gnso-epdp-team@icann.org<mailto:Gnso-epdp-team@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-epdp-team _______________________________________________ By submitting your personal data, you consent to the processing of your personal data for purposes of subscribing to this mailing list accordance with the ICANN Privacy Policy (https://www.icann.org/privacy/policy) and the website Terms of Service (https://www.icann.org/privacy/tos). You can visit the Mailman link above to change your membership status or configuration, including unsubscribing, setting digest-style delivery or disabling delivery altogether (e.g., for a vacation), and so on.
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